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In Bed Or In Life (Made To Be Broken 6.5/10)

May 21, 2011 06:56

Author: Oddreigh

Title: In Bed Or In Life (Made To Be Broken 6.5/10)

Rating: R

Word Count: 940

Pairing: Chris/Darren. Kind of. ;)

Warning(s): Brief mentions of sexual situations

Spoilers: Oh dear god, no.

Summary: Chris finds something unexpected while at Darren’s. Darren is mortified, but in a really good way.

Notes: This is likely going ( Read more... )

rpf, rating: r, series: made to be broken, bits and bobs

Comments 25

klainechriss May 21 2011, 18:33:38 UTC

Awww! This is seriously too cute. I would love to think of this as a preview, but no one can really know what the next chapter will hold. I especially love Darren's half-asleep persona. So perfect.

iwrotestuff May 22 2011, 04:34:31 UTC

Yeah, I'm not even sure exactly how it's going to go. It's kind of gone off the rails a bit, and it's hard figuring out exactly what to do with them. I know what's going to be said (because Seven is very very talky), but the original background action just isn't working the way I'd hoped. :/

This was the fourth attempt I made at it, and even though it's not quite right, I liked it too much to just throw away. <3

mochachiato May 21 2011, 19:50:22 UTC

I love this story. I'm really hoping that this turns into a relationship. Somehow friends with benefits is a huge turn off for me, cause I'm a romantic like that. This chapter is so sweet though! The banter is really well done, too.

iwrotestuff May 22 2011, 04:38:02 UTC

Back in my days on the debate team, I'd constantly be called out by my coaches for my reliance on semantics. It was just known that if you went up against me, one of my first points would be based on definitions. That tendency of mine is making it very difficult to answer some of these comments honestly without giving too much away. I could never be Ryan Murphy - I fail at advanced trolling. ;>

I'm glad you liked this. Their banter will be a big part of Seven. :)

aalikane May 21 2011, 20:05:53 UTC

Awww.....this was cute. Can't wait for more :D

iwrotestuff May 22 2011, 04:39:25 UTC

Thank you. :)

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iwrotestuff May 22 2011, 04:44:41 UTC

I kinda' love them too. <3

apleby_arrow May 21 2011, 21:34:00 UTC

It was adorable. Nice break.<3

iwrotestuff May 22 2011, 04:45:17 UTC

Thank you. It's a little fluffier than it was meant to be, but it made me smile. :)