I was so excited when I saw your update! It's been ages and I WAS NOT DISAPPOINTED omg this chapter soo many things I wanna to talk about - where to begin??
Well for one thing the family rift did not put me off as much as I thought it would, mainly because how could things NOT be awkward in that house (with Elise as the sister/surrogate plus mother/aunt) and I felt that what Merlin had to say must have been something he's been holding in for a while. That didn't stop me from hating him just a little though which is bad because I simply adore him and Anoki :( still do. Stop playing with my feelings damnit! Of course, one good thing did come out from it... Eeee Tyler I will never get bored looking at his face he is just perf as well as the perfect gentleman. I'm curious to see what you have planned for the doctor and also his fiance. I could be wrong but I don't think they're just a counselor and a fangirl :p
I adore your writing and story-telling. You can tell that you put a lot of effort into it and I enjoy reading it as always :)
Oh, good! Family's are temperamental at the best of times, but hopefully you'll like where it goes next. (I need to open up my game though - I've been playing IP for ages. :D )
Awwh, Tyler. He's ma babe. Just a genuinely nice guy (not "Nice Guy™", though :D )
Yeah, the doctor's an interesting guy - you'll get to learn more about Mini's friends, too; they're kind of awesome. (which reminds me that i need to credit their creators. woops.) I don't think I've got any ulterior motives for the couple, but we'll see how the story progresses.
*blubbers* thank you arilyn. i hope i wont disappoint you in future updates! xxxx
I love getting your updates! So much thought and creativity must go into your chapters. This one was wonderful. I felt so emotional for Elise the whole time and so mad at her brother and his partner for sending Ajax off to boarding school without consulting her about it. The moment between Elise and Tyler when she was crying was absolutely beautiful and also leads me to my only question for you from this chapter. Which pose boxes are you using? Everything was so well thought out and beautiful, the poses so tender and sweet. I'd love to have them for my game.
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Well for one thing the family rift did not put me off as much as I thought it would, mainly because how could things NOT be awkward in that house (with Elise as the sister/surrogate plus mother/aunt) and I felt that what Merlin had to say must have been something he's been holding in for a while. That didn't stop me from hating him just a little though which is bad because I simply adore him and Anoki :( still do. Stop playing with my feelings damnit! Of course, one good thing did come out from it... Eeee Tyler I will never get bored looking at his face he is just perf as well as the perfect gentleman. I'm curious to see what you have planned for the doctor and also his fiance. I could be wrong but I don't think they're just a counselor and a fangirl :p
I adore your writing and story-telling. You can tell that you put a lot of effort into it and I enjoy reading it as always :)
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Oh, good! Family's are temperamental at the best of times, but hopefully you'll like where it goes next. (I need to open up my game though - I've been playing IP for ages. :D )
Awwh, Tyler. He's ma babe. Just a genuinely nice guy (not "Nice Guy™", though :D )
Yeah, the doctor's an interesting guy - you'll get to learn more about Mini's friends, too; they're kind of awesome. (which reminds me that i need to credit their creators. woops.) I don't think I've got any ulterior motives for the couple, but we'll see how the story progresses.
*blubbers* thank you arilyn. i hope i wont disappoint you in future updates! xxxx
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