Comments | iwantpie: Fic: Rise and Fall (Logan, Veronica) PG

iwantpie

Fic: Rise and Fall (Logan, Veronica) PG

Jul 17, 2007 19:38

Remember reading that I was writing a fic and wasn't sure when my lazy ass would finish it? So finished it. But it's short so that makes me kind of pathetic that it took me this long. It was a random thing that popped in my head at work. I would really appreciate some feedback. I don't write often enough to believe I'm any good. LOL.

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fanfiction: veronica mars

Comments 14

beneathwaves July 18 2007, 00:05:36 UTC

You are brilliance. ^_^

iwantpie July 18 2007, 00:08:02 UTC

You are love in a fluffy bunny package. *licks*

beneathwaves July 18 2007, 02:50:19 UTC

RAR! Because that's the sound a bunny makes. *nod*

iwantpie July 20 2007, 21:30:48 UTC

Bunnies roar. *nod* *squeeze*

afrocurl July 18 2007, 19:09:17 UTC

That hurts in the best way possible. I mean, I've always thought that Logan had a very contemplative side, and this really nails that point home.

Thanks for this!

iwantpie July 19 2007, 20:54:52 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥♥♥

freezing_82 July 18 2007, 21:28:04 UTC

He took some comfort in knowing that when he left this evening, tomorrow they would be waiting for him.

I LOVE this line! it's like..Logan could feel safe and strong only with this constant in his life. Cause in my opinion, sad that it may be, Veronica's not a constant in his life at this point. I mean, not a healthy constant. She's persistent in his life..she's been since they were 12, but there's something more attractive for him in the waves. The fact that their routine is always the same, but it could change in a heartbeat with no warning and destroy everything.
Am I making any sense? LOL
Ok, thing is I find Logan very IC and believable in this introspective side. It totally works for me!

Nice job, K!! You should write Logan more often :D

iwantpie July 19 2007, 20:59:11 UTC

I only noticed your icon AFTER I read your comment but I'm responding to that first. I. Want. LOL. Okay, moving on.

I'm so glad you liked it, dude! Whenever I write Logan I always worry about being in character because I'm one of those people that hates reading stories where authors completely change him.

Did you pick up on Veronica's attitude in this? We know she just wanted things to go back to normal and her way of doing that was to ignore things so I thought I'd add a little of that in there.

I'm so giddy right now it's ridiculous. LOVE!

freezing_82 July 20 2007, 11:12:03 UTC

Haha!
Veronica's a master in hiding her real, true feelings and pretending everything's fine until her little utopic world crashes in front of her eyes.
And again, this was totally believable and IC! ;)

iwantpie July 20 2007, 21:27:59 UTC

*hugs* Thank you!

inthevast July 19 2007, 21:00:05 UTC

Gorgeous writing and so very beautiful, I love when you wrote that Logan chose to ride the waves instead of watch the sun, and Veronica understood that.

You should write more. :)

iwantpie July 20 2007, 21:28:47 UTC

Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment! :) I'm glad you liked the story. ♥♥♥

iheartvmars07 July 20 2007, 02:19:07 UTC

i love the story, i love stories like this; that show a deeper more meaningful side of a character. plus anything about logan is good, im going to miss him. okay so lets not think about that, i really like the story and its going in my memories

iwantpie July 20 2007, 21:29:20 UTC

Awesome! Thank you so very much! :) *bounces*