[FIC] My S Vol. 3: Torn: Chapter 4

[iwantmyhamato]

Title: My S, Vol 3: Torn
Author: moon1084
Editor and Chief: fi_chan
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC 17
Genre: Violence, Sex, Romance, Drama
Length: 4/9
Graphics: unknowntibidip
Summary: Seoul’s undercover detective Kim JaeJoong has one goal in his life and that is to dispose of all of the guns that stain the streets of South Korea. It’s one hard goal, without a doubt, an overwhelmingly

Comments

[iwantmyhamato]

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[blu_eyezz]

Oooh bb!I guessed correctly?? *___* Awesome!!!Am I good or what?!!! ;) j/k

And its soo nice to have u back hun *hugs* I missed ur story. For a while, I thought maybe u aint gonna update it anymore after what happened. I didnt want to prod in case u started getting frustrated by ppl askin y u stopped... ^^;;

Why is JJ landing himself into more & more trouble every time...seriously yunho should keep like start looking out for him since JJ almost always never listens to yunho when he says dont do something >.< but their relationship is so beautiful and at the same time fragile.I dont want it to break :( Its nice that yunho knows which buttons to push in JJ for him to calm down and totally understands him

[gwishin]

Thanks for the update!
Yunho was so sweet here, taking care of Jae <3
Jae is being investigated? Sounds ominous. And I'm worried about Geng too. So many things keeping me hooked.

[gwishin]

I'm sorry ^^;; I replied to you by accident~

[iwantmyhamato]

kunang_kunang

[kunang_kunang]

OMG!!!!
my guess is corret??cant believe..hhehee..

k...off to read..

[kunang_kunang]

yunho is so concern bout jae..
jae being watch???
hopefully not because of their relationship..

[moon1084]

Yes is. Someone has to be right?
And yes Jaejoong is being watched.
Let's hope not.

Thanks for reading!

[yuki_3]

SPOT :'D

[moon1084]

omo my ninjae?? lol! hi bb! miss you! no net at home

[yuki_3]

Oh yeah .. Gotta sharpen my ninja skills *winks*

waaaaaah.. They are watching jae o.O .. WHY? ..
BUT ..
I just klfgyuifgyuguu LOVED the yunjae here .. Jae was suddenly afraid and asked yunnie to hold him and touch him while yun was just so damn sweet .. I loved how they became so close to the point of bickering with each other . . Awwwww so sweet ..

Loved the chapter and can't wait for more ..

PS: miss u 2 bb .. I'm launching a damn hard investigation over something happening here .. Will talk to u later , because this is so damn scary DX

[moon1084]

LMAO! Sharpen away my love.

Apparently they are watching him.

Do you? I am glad to hear that. I love YunJae too. lol!

Did we ever talk about this investigation??

[moon1084]

sexy ninjae gets lots of yummy yunjae cookies

[moon1084]

It's okay. Look how long it took me to effing reply to these comments. Been so damn lazy about it.

Yeah YunJae's relationship is developing so lets hope it stays that way too.

And jaejoong, this boy. I don't know what to do with this boy. And you will find out soon enough why they are watching him.

Thanks for always commenting my lovely donsaeng. I need to start on the next chap. And I can't wait for yours either.

[hydraheiress]

spot for me unnie... ^__^

[hydraheiress]

Man, the thing about the Human Affairs is bugging the crap out of me >:/ For some reason I think that they've already had an idea regarding Jaejoong's real relationship with his S. It's making me anxious thinking what they might do in the future T__T Judging from how a cop is going to be treated once their dirt gets found out, damn it's like... there's really no option to choose at all. Everything sucked. Here's to hoping nothing too drastic happens.

Anyway, onto the YunJae <3333

Gosh, I couldn't contain my giggles with how dorky and adorable Yunho is in this chapter. Same goes for Jaejoong, I'm glad he finally acknowledges Yunho as a man, as a lover. Ahhh, so happy right now. The shower scene was hot! Just those few sentences, I mean you didn't have to go into details and I already had a pretty darn good mental image of a hot shower handjob <333 Yunho is so considerate and loving but LOL! I seriously laughed when he was asking for compensation for their next session XDD That's just so like Yunho. hehehehe

[moon1084]

OMG! I think it took me an hour to read this comment LOL! I don't think I can beat your reply but I will try lol!

You are going to see soon enough why Jaejoong is being watched by the human affairs. I can't give away anything or it will ruin it for you hun.

YunHo is always dorky for Jaejoong. He is like this bad ass mafia but when it comes down to it, he is a dork.

I love heechul too! He is always the best. I think any role can suit him so well.

I am glad you didn't have to wait to long. Now don't make me wait to love for Thin Line Between...

thanks for reading bb!

[hydraheiress]

ahahaha! it's completely fine unnie XDD I'm glad you're answering back. Sure, I'll wait but it's kinda killing me with anticipation >.> Aish, gotta distract myself with other things for the meantime... LOL! Its seriously my weakness when either of the boys are bad asses to anyone else but are reduced to be dorks for each other <333 there's just something so endearing to that! *giggles* ack, I just updated that fic unnie and am trying to start working on the next chapter as we speak =) gah, I'm feeling effing tired though, stupid condition -_-