Comments | iwantchips: fic 005.

takethewords in iwantchips

fic 005.

Mar 18, 2009 16:37

Doctor Who | A Lot Can Happen in a Little, Nine/Rose, PG
post "Father's Day".
It had been like watching his planet burn all over again, in her eyes that day on the street corner. She presses a palm to his chest, feeling the twin beats inside. Looks down at where she's touching him like he carries the secrets of the universe beyond his ribs. "Are ( Read more... )

fiction: pairing. nine/rose, fiction: tv. doctor who

Comments 51

anogete March 18 2009, 21:16:24 UTC

This was beautiful! Absolutely gorgeous! Ack! I have no words. Love it! Yay!

takethewords March 18 2009, 21:32:22 UTC

hee Thank you! :)

jai_23 March 18 2009, 21:38:42 UTC

Right, so let me get this straight. YOU weren't going to post this today because of MY fic? IDK WHAT I WOULD HAVE DONE TO MYSELF IF YOU HADN'T. Because this is like the other end of the spectrum to my fic. This is wonderfulness in happy, NINE (♥) ways. :) This is the going for a walk on a sunny, humid night. THIS. IS TOO BEAUTIFUL.

I'M BEING SO OUTSHONE THAT I'M BLIND BB. You're just that amazing.

So, this is me, completely, hopelessly, stupidly adoring you and this fic. ♥

takethewords March 18 2009, 23:09:57 UTC

WHATEVER BB. Your writing intimidates me, okay.
So I was a bit nervous.

And no one could outshine you, but I'm so happy you like it because well, it's you.

DITTO TO YOU BB. ♥ ♥

lostwolfchats March 18 2009, 21:42:51 UTC

Gorgeous!!!

takethewords March 18 2009, 23:07:20 UTC

Thank you!

mylittlepwny March 18 2009, 21:44:38 UTC

There's a sliver of sun peeking over the horizon, he can tell, because it's suddenly brighter in the room. Brighter across her grinning face when she asks him for something she's had for a while. "Can I have it?"

My heart was already on some shaky ground before this happened, but once it did it was like a fault line opened up, okay, tectonic plates shifting and pushing and forming this GIANT CHASM where my heart just fluttered into and paused, like, literally, paused, and stuttered, and then started beating again at double time, because oh, Kat.
This is too beautiful for beautiful to encompass.
And PERFECT, god, just, perfect, with the Doctor and his stupidly adoring Rose Tyler and wonderful, earth shattering things happening before 6 in the morning, in Spain, Spain!, and in a hotel with white sheets and wind blowing in from the ocean that probably smells a little like sun block and sand and Rose Tyler in a t-shirt and smooth legs ON THE DOCTOR'S LAP and asking for his heart, oh my godddd, I will never get over that, never ever ( ... )

takethewords March 18 2009, 23:13:16 UTC

I'm in love, with you. And your comments.

AND YOU DO KNOW IT'S IN SPAIN BECAUSE OF YOU? Yes, there is nothing about it that makes it specifically Spanish or whatever but I knew it would be beach centered so might as well make it in Spain for my darling!

♥ ♥ ♥

angel932 March 18 2009, 22:12:12 UTC

WOW! Excellent prose, my dear!

takethewords March 18 2009, 23:07:39 UTC

hee Thanks! :)