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poetic_self May 20 2011, 09:02:12 UTC
Your writing is always something to look forward to. This time, I do like the Mycroft ones, especially :)

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weefreethings May 20 2011, 12:20:22 UTC
Great stuff! The Moriarty/Moran ones are marvelously creepy. Definitely love the Mycroft/Lestrade one! Those two desperately need friends!

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darthhellokitty May 20 2011, 17:52:07 UTC
Wow, these are AMAZING. What an incredible project! You capture all the characters incredibly well with these moments.

One little thing: I think you want innervate (to give energy), not enervate (to be drained of energy). Nobody ever gets those right. ;-)

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ivywatcher May 20 2011, 18:05:12 UTC
Thank you for reading! Always appreciated :)

The prompt word actually was enervate; I thought John being forced into inaction for most of that pool scene was very much a draining of energy for him. But I keep doing little antonyms in these things despite myself, so it only seemed fair to let him move at the end.

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darthhellokitty May 20 2011, 18:09:46 UTC
Sorry about that! I'll use the fact that I'm on pain meds as an excuse.

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ivywatcher May 20 2011, 18:14:46 UTC
No worries, really! The fact that you even know the definition of both of those words and can articulate the difference *while* on pain meds makes you a deeply valuable reader. It's nice to know that when I get something wrong, somebody will catch it.

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morganstuart May 21 2011, 00:13:32 UTC
They put him in the middle, forming a loose horseshoe around him.

John grinned and joined Sherlock, just to complete the curve.

Oh, how I adore this.

A second before the world turned white, John surged forward.

YES!!! Yes, he does. I can see it.

What gifts these are. Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for sharing them.

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ivywatcher May 21 2011, 04:45:05 UTC
Have I said thank you for your reviews lately?

If not, THANK YOU. Because they always make my day, and you leave a lot of them. You are rather marvelous.

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morganstuart May 21 2011, 13:32:22 UTC
Aw! :) That's so kind of you to say. You're rather marvelous yourself, you know.

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red314159 October 9 2011, 21:36:47 UTC
Oh, Metamorphosis broke my heart. Poor Molly.

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