[WC Fic] "Cake or Death", rated PG-13 (Part 1 of 1)

[ivorysilk]

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Title: Cake or Death
Author: Ivorysilk
Rating: PG
Characters: Elizabeth, Neal, Peter, and a bit of Mozzie and June
Word Count: About 4500
Spoilers: None, and everything up to season three, really.
Summary:
As soon as Elizabeth Burke left the shop, Mozzie turned to him and hissed, "You are way out of your

Comments

[calis_1st]

This was so much fun. Now I want cake, and I want more of this story!

And a martini.

[ivorysilk]

HEE!!! I am glad it inspired this, then! And I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[story_unfolding]

OMG! Loved this so much. Please tell me there is a second part or more to this delightful story. I agree with all of hoosierbitch's comments and favorite sections. Neal's relationship with Elizabeth and meeting Peter the first time = wonderful! Please write more!

[ivorysilk]

Haha! As I've said above, for some reason I was convinced this story only made sense in my own head, and so I'm really glad you liked it! I hadn't really planned on more, but shall ponder. :-)

[jrosemary]

ROFL! I loved this from start to finish! I love the reversal--I love seeing El and Neal meet first, and fighting off their attraction to each other, before Peter and Neal FINALLY lay eyes on each other. I love the cake Neal made. I love Mozzie's colors. I just want to eat up everything about this fic. :D

[ivorysilk]

Thank you for your help with it when I was frantic, and for putting up with me stressing at you! And I'm glad you liked it too :-)

[embroiderama]

This is wonderful! I love everything, but June's protectiveness of Neal was especially perfect.

[ivorysilk]

Thank you! I do like a protective June, I must confess. In my head, she "rescued" Neal and Mozzie in this fic, before Neal went into a life of irreversible criminal activity, and Moz--while he started younger, and his past was possibly more questionable--also went respectable before anyone could catch him, and now they are perfectly content doing illegal things only with flour. :-)

[lauracollared]

This is fantastic! Normally I am weirded out by Neal/El but this totally works with the role reversal!

The fic is yuuuuummy. nom nom nom. And I do not just mean because of the cake. UNF the descriptions of Neal. Yessss.

The last line -- taking another bite of the pop? -- um yes please???

Also lol that Neal is still a criminal. I love that he decorated that scene on the cake. Ha! Another way of him explaining how he did the Monet switch -- not that Peter would ever believe him! ;p

Seriously, this is great fun. Sexy, sweet, and funny.

[ivorysilk]

Oh, I could totally see Neal/El, in a different world, and so I did! I think they'd have a lot of fun together :-). I am so glad you liked this piece--thank you for commenting!