[WC Fic] "Half-Pint Squared", rated PG

Mar 25, 2012 17:53

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Title: Half-Pint Squared
Author: Ivorysilk
Rating: PG
Summary: Sequel to my earlier fic, Half-Pint Neal, which was written for the whitecollarhc comm’s feverfest; this one is being posted for the whitecollarhc community’s kidfest. You don’t really need to read the first one to read this one if you don’t want; all you need to know is ( Read more... )

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lauracollared March 25 2012, 23:05:08 UTC
Awwwwwwww! Gosh, this mini-Neal breaks my heart! But I love your 'verse and I can't wait for you to write the 3rd part!!

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ivorysilk March 26 2012, 04:41:22 UTC
Thank you! The third part will be a while--I have a vague outline in my head, but little else--but I am so glad you liked this part--I rearranged it at the last moment, so I'm glad it worked!

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ivorysilk March 26 2012, 04:42:12 UTC
Oh, yay! I'm glad you will be finished your research paper soon, and I'm glad you are finishing it first (I need no further fanfic related guilt *g*!) and I really really hope you like it! Good luck with the paper!

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ivorysilk April 2 2012, 05:03:44 UTC
Awww, thank you so so much! You know I felt the same way about your little Neal. LITTLE NEAL!!!! He is adorable personified!

Thank you for reading, and while this month is insane, as soon as I can, I shall work on further bb!Neal! Because he must now go to the museum. WIth Peter. Because he must *g*.

Ah, Peter. He can only wish now that he all he had to do was take adult Neal to the White Board exhibit, because this will be so much worse!

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hannahazzard March 25 2012, 23:50:57 UTC
Awesome! I'm so glad you wrote a sequel ^^ your writing is excellent and I absolutely love the Peter and Neal fluff you write, of course El is good aswell, but I love father/son shmoop :D
lil' Neal is just adorable
very well done ^^

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ivorysilk March 26 2012, 04:42:59 UTC
I'm so glad! I know, this is self-indulgent paternal!Peter, really, but I do enjoy it so--I'm glad you enjoyed it too! Thank you for reading it and commenting :-).

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droodlebug March 26 2012, 01:06:15 UTC
Thank you so much for continuing this. Little Neal is tweaking all of my maternal snuggling instincts. I hope Peter can find that awful "uncle", and what in the world was Mozzie telling him about the kids who aren't worth punishing and don't get to stay? Was it something Neal misunderstood or was it something Mozzie had related to Neal about his own childhood at some point?

I am so looking forward to much more!

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ivorysilk March 26 2012, 04:45:25 UTC
Well, that's the AU part--in the AU in my head, Neal and Mozzie met as kids, once upon a time--and I can just see tween!Moz telling kid!Neal this kind of thing. Its so very Moz--and possibly actually true as well. A Moz is created, not born, if you ask me (well, he's also a little born. But you know what I mean *g*).

I'm so glad you are still reading and enjoying this series! Thanks very much for taking the time to comment :-)

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droodlebug March 26 2012, 18:08:14 UTC
Oh yes, I am enjoying it very much and can't wait for the next part.

About the AU background--I'm sure there is a great story there and I hope Peter remembers to ask Mozzie to explain what that was all about. lol.

Please take everything out of your head and post it soon!

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micheleeeex March 26 2012, 02:20:44 UTC
Awwwwwww, bb!Neal is so adorable and he is breaking my heart *waits for the next part patiently*

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ivorysilk March 26 2012, 04:47:15 UTC
Hee! It might be a bit--I have a couple of other wips to work on--but I am really happy you are enjoying this series! Baby!Neal is so much fun to write--in the next part, he trips off to the museum ... and Peter gets distracted by his own lectures, while Neal gets distracted by *everything* ... and yeah, that's pretty much the summary *g*. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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