[WC Fic] "Swan Dive", rated PG (part 1 of 1)

[ivorysilk]

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Title: Swan Dive
Author: Ivorysilk
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Checkmate (Episode 3-11)
Summary Written to satisfy my need for post-ep hurt/comfort (this one focuses on Neal, although they all get pretty whumped, and I might need to write that fic too).

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, or this universe

Comments

[winterstar95]

Oh thank you so much. I cannot believe I had to wait this long for a post episode story. This was perfect and well worth the wait.

[ivorysilk]

Awww, thank you so much! The ep, to me, screamed post-ep h/c, and I'm surprised it did not spawn a slew of fics. Like, serious canon whumpage there was, for all three of them, even if El's hair still did look perfect after her kidnapping. :-)

[secretsolitaire]

I feel like the show will never dwell on any serious injuries, so it's a good thing we have fic like this to do it for us. ;-)

[ivorysilk]

Well, I can't believe it has not spawned more post-eps! I was kind of thinking someone else would take the bait--and then, of course, I had to. Thank you for reading! (I feel I've kept you busy today *g*)

[ebeneezerdark]

I started one, but it sorta stalled. This one's much better.

As you say, Neal got BADLY whumped, and there SHOULD have been some medical consequences.

[arsenicjade]

OMG, I was wondering when somebody was going to take care of this OBVIOUS HOLE IN CONTINUITY for me. I'm sooo glad it was you. Mwah.

[ivorysilk]

OH yay! I'm glad you liked it--and I'm super glad you are watching WC again!!!! I am going to dare to hope you will write more in this fandom (you know what i'm talking about!), after all the other things you are working on. YAY!

Thank you! I feel like this ep should have spawned a slough of post-ep h/c fics--so I am hoping for many more! :-)

[arsenicjade]

I'm in the kidfest. And the next one (which is actually before the one I told you about) is SUPER Neal-centric. Like, even moreso than usual.

[ivorysilk]

Oh, my dear. You have NO IDEA of how insanely I am grinning right now. Like, I think I am scaring the rabbits. YOU HAVE MADE ME SCARE MY RABBITS.

I can't wait.

[embroiderama]

Oh, I love this! It's pretty much precisely what I've been wanting to read since the episode, and done so very well. I want to give them all hugs.

[ivorysilk]

I am so glad you liked it! And yes, they all do deserve hugs! And they should have them ... I feel like there should be a ton more post-ep fics :-) Thank you for reading, and I hope you write one too!

[teaotter]

*squee!*

This makes me insanely happy, the way they feel about each other when everything else isn't in the way.

I love Peter's confusion here, especially because clearly they just did not understand. Neal was fine. Elizabeth was at home, and she was fine. He didn’t understand why they were all even still here. It's a lovely bit of panic there, and Diana's response was perfect.

[ivorysilk]

Oh, I am so, so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading it, and for your wonderful feedback. :-)