not afraid to fall [chapter 16]

May 28, 2012 01:29


Title: not afraid to fall [chapter 16]
Author: ivoryroyale
Genre: supernatural, hurt/comfort, friendship, (sort of) romance, drama
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language, very unrequited daejae, probably very sucky writing
Summary: in which a group of six aren't afraid to stand tall because they have each other.
Note: 5,456 words.Chapter's focused mainly on ( Read more... )

!series, member: daehyun, member: youngjae, genre: friendship, series: not afraid to fall, fandom: b.a.p, member: yongguk, genre: drama, member: zelo, genre: hurt/comfort, genre: supernatural, pairing: daehyun/jongup, genre: romance, member: jongup, member: himchan

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twiggyrocks2815 May 28 2012, 19:26:53 UTC
I'm so happy you've updated! I've been waiting for this for so long... Sorry to hear about your grandma and school and stuff, that sounds so stressful. Good luck with that and with the coming chapters!

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ivoryroyale May 28 2012, 23:30:45 UTC
I'm so sorry for making you wait so long. :< And I'll try my best! :> Thank you for your concern and for reading!!! ^^

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lhlarsson May 28 2012, 20:38:49 UTC
PABOYA! THIS IS FAAAAAAAAR FROM SUCKISH!!!! IT'S AMAZING I SAY, UH-MAY-ZING!!!

Here, have a wave and an applause form Yongguk to commemorate your awesomness! :D


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ivoryroyale May 28 2012, 23:30:51 UTC
Awww, you flatter me so much! :> Thank you so much bb, you're so sweet! <3

Yay! Hi Yongguk! /waves. He's so handsome. *Q*

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babyzelo May 28 2012, 21:05:39 UTC
SNFKLSDJFASLD JUNHONG CAN FEEL SOMETHING! \o/ Although it's jealously, he can feel! I feel like...a proud mother or something. x: But I do not think you write like crap AT ALL; this fanfiction is one of the best I've ever read! The thoughts, emotions and everything is packed into a neat package and if there was anything out of place, I sure didn't notice. I can't wait until your next update. :D Hope your grandma feels better~

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ivoryroyale May 28 2012, 23:30:57 UTC
Lol, Junhong can feel whatever someone else feels whenever he has physical contact with them. :> It's a new trick to his ability. :)

Aww, thanks bb! I'm flattered! =v= You're so sweet! Thanks for reading! :D

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byakuya_777 May 29 2012, 01:49:20 UTC
Oh, I loved this chapter!!! It always amazes me how you can depict so perfectly their emotions and thoughts; I will never think that what you write sucks, you´re way too awesome!!!
I really hope Youngjae and Junhong get better, it breaks my heart to watch them this way ;~;
And I hope your grandma gets better quickly! Don´t worry about updating, family always comes first, fighting! ♥

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ivoryroyale May 29 2012, 02:45:22 UTC
Aw, thanks bb! I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading! ^^ So many compliments in one comment. ;AA; I feel so flattered; thank you so much!!
They'll feel better, don't worry! They'll be happy, obnoxious little puppies together. xD
Thank you! I'll work hard! I'm lucky to have such amazing, understanding readers! :> <3

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GAHHH I MISSED YOU!!! :3 tikibuddy91 May 29 2012, 13:04:28 UTC
YOU'RE BACKK~~

;a; i hope your grandma is alright :(

Your fic has been one of the few fics that have been on my mind for so long, and I got worried when you didn't update. tbh, I was dreading that you had discontinued it or something D: but i'm glad it wasn't the case ^w^

Anyway, this chapter... the Playful Paint scene of DaeJae :3 Paint is such an annoying substance to get off clothes >_<; and LOL everytime i see the italic words, (it's out of habit really), i keep thinking Daehyun is telepathically communicating with Youngjae and I'm like.. "wait...isn't he a shadow manipulator though? or like he can manipulate people with his words...........OH RIGHT. paper/pen communication" *facepalm* LOL.......*sigh* I can relate to the unrequited love sometimes, mostly because it never really works out for me anyway to be in a relationship. >_<; 21 and still single OTL ( ... )

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Re: GAHHH I MISSED YOU TOO!!! :> ivoryroyale May 29 2012, 17:39:55 UTC
I AM~~ xD Thank you for reading! ^^

Aww, she's doing just fine! :) Thank you for your concern! <3

I don't think I'm going to discontinue this fic at any time. It's like my baby now, lol. As strange as that sounds. xD I want to finish my first fic. :>

LOL, yeah, the italics are confusing. xD I think I'm going to go back and just change the font of the writing so that it's easy to tell it's Daehyun writing stuff down.

I write the unrequited love based on some of my old feelings, so I hope it's relatable. :) And, don't worry bb! You'll find someone! You're still very young imo and you sound really nice and sweet! :3

It's okay if you can't wait for the DaeJong; Youngjae has Zelo to make him feel better. :> And of course there's hope for him to have feels! Youngjae'll do everything he can to fix him! ^^

Omg, your comment made me so happy! <3 I'll be sure to read your DaeJong whenever you post it. :3 And most people hate their writing; I'm sure your writing is great! :)

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Re: GAHHH I MISSED YOU TOO!!! :> tikibuddy91 May 30 2012, 23:48:38 UTC
I just recently posted up a prologue of BAP/EXO crossover :3

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Re: GAHHH I MISSED YOU TOO!!! :> ivoryroyale May 31 2012, 02:25:39 UTC
Oh, I'll go read it right now! :)

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