not afraid to fall [chapter 7]

[ivoryroyale]

Title: not afraid to fall [chapter 7]
Author: ivoryroyale
Genre: supernatural, friendship, hurt/comfort, drama, suspense
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language
Summary: in a which a group of six aren't afraid to stand tall because they have each other
Note: 2,902 words. 
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Comments

[chasing_thewind]

Nice chapter! I like how Yongguk just gets coerced into taking all of them. It's kind of cute... if you ignore the fact that he's bringing them to a lab that experiments on mutants... O.o. Just kidding, but still! I think that this is dangerous either way, because if the government knows that there's a group of mutants that have banded together, what are they going to do?
Excited to see about how they plan to go about rescuing Zelo, and if they're going to bring along any other mutants. For the lab guy, I fully support making him GD. However, be aware that if you give the lab guy a name, he's expected to show up in later chapters as well, which would make him a recurring antagonist.
Otherwise, there's not much to say about this chapter, seeing as it's basically all arguing and persuasion. But it's good to see Daehyun speak up for a while. Awaiting your next chapter eagerly! Cheers!
PS- I really do like this chapter.

[ivoryroyale]

Lol, I'm glad you liked it! ^^
Yeah, the whole situation is pretty dangerous at the moment for all of them.
And yes, the lab guy is going to be a recurring antagonist (I don't know if I should be saying this or not but... oh well. lol.) so that's why I want to give him a name. He's going to be an important part of the story.
Thank you for reading! :D

[numptysmeg]

Oh Man.. you're gonna have some really heart wrenching Banghim scene coming up soon aren't you? Like Yongguk telling Himchan he believes in him as he runs off into gunfire protected by Himchan's barrier or IDK Himchan using it to protect one of the other boys whilst being experiments on or something

OTL But Banghim <3

I wanna give little Jongup lots of cuddles and laugh at Youngjae and Daehyun

[ivoryroyale]

I'm planning on having heart wrenching scenes but I'm not going to say if they're Banghim or not. They could be Daejong, Younglo, Daejae, Jonglo (is that Jongup's and Zelo's couple name? ._.) /likes to torture my readers by giving them vague hints lmao

LOL, why do you want to laugh at Youngjae and Daehyun? xD

Thank you for reading! ^^

[imhappi]

Chapter~~~~~~

Personally, I loved this chapter! Omg poor Zelo T___T and it was like.......the plot was coming together, they now have a solid purpose, a plan, and omg the whole family atmosphere was so heartwarming T-T
and Yongguk not wanting Himchan to see his ruthless side, aw<3

For the creepy lab dude, maybe G-Dragon...? Lol dunno, but he sure looks like he would fit the part of a creepy mad scientist or someone along those lines in the m/v for Fantastic Baby XD Maybe it's the hair...

Anyways, again, I reallyyy liked this chapter :DD Can't wait for the next one!~ ^^

[ivoryroyale]

I'm glad you liked it bb! :D
Yay, my plot's coming together~ xD
Yongguk's just a softy when it comes to his wifey. :3

I think it is the hair. Lol. And possibly the makeup around his eye.
So that's about... three, maybe four people for GD? I think he wins. LOL.

Thank you for reading! ^^

[imhappi]

No one can deny how much of an antagonist character he looks lol XD I'm sorry GD T-T;

[ivoryroyale]

Isn't it just the greatest family trip ever?

I plan the next chapter to be Zelo being tortured and experimented on while the members try to break into the lab.

And I'm sorry, I think a lot of people wish for the villain to be GD. >.<

Lmao. That picture. xD But really, they do need to soon, don't they?

[ivoryroyale]

The torture scenes are going to be really bad. Just saying. The next chapter is most likely going to be rated R. I'm kinda worried about what people are going to think. >.<

Lol. It's cause GD just looks so crazy and fashionista-ish. And I don't know about other people, but when I write a certain member as a psycho or if I torture them a lot in my fics, it usually means I like him/her a lot because I'm twisted like that. That sounds really bad, doesn't it? o-o;;

I still plan on them confessing much later in this AU, so they kind of aren't going to until a lot (like, a lot, a lot) later. c:

[byakuya_777]

OMG the action scenes are coming!!!
I read this and the previous chapter together, it was a good decision(although accidental), I tend to be a nervous wreck really easily out of curiosity, lol.
I´m really loving this story, I told you, right? ♥_♥
Cant wait to see Yongguk and Himchan finally confessing their feelings, these two are gonna kill me!!!
Oh, and I vote for GD too! I love him to pieces -he´s my ultimate bias- but he so totally fits the crazy character. I guess it´s because of his image, I mean, he´s a fashionista and he acts so cool and free, it has this kind of unique personality that makes you think of him as the twisted cool villain. Idk, it´s just my opinion xD
Lol, such a long reply >.< sorry if it is confusing, english is not my native language.
❤

[ivoryroyale]

Yes they are! Along with some and I mean some as in a lot of >< torture scenes.

Daw, I'm glad you're loving the story. Thanks bb! ^^

I don't plan on them confessing their feelings anytime soon though. I hope that's okay. :c

GD it is then. :>

I like long replies, so it's okay! :D And don't worry, it's not confusing. Your english is perfect. :) <3