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ivorykiss

Uninvited (An Unfortunate Slight) - Bizarroe - Chlark - NC-17 - 15/17

May 18, 2010 02:38

*ninjas in and posts a loooong overdue update*

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bizarroe, chlark, bizarro, smallville, chloe, clark, fic: uninvited (an unfortunate slight), fic, smut

Comments 9

firebunny May 18 2010, 06:51:21 UTC

Yay! An update. This makes me very happy.

But Chloe got hurt and it looks like it's pretty bad. That doesn't make me happy. Hope we get another update soon so we find out her fate.

I must commend you on your use of color here. The azures, golds, greens, reds and blacks, I really like it.

ivorykiss June 5 2010, 04:50:15 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and my use of colors!

Yeah, poor, poor Chloe. She's been through a lot in this fic.

angelbsb May 18 2010, 07:30:53 UTC

yes an update love this. oh no chloe got hurt . plus the real clark realized his true feelings for her . but the cave is trying to tell the three of them that chloe is not the " one " for them right . oh PPMS

ivorykiss June 5 2010, 04:53:34 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked!

Actually, no. The cave isn't telling them that Chloe isn't the 'one', quite the opposite in fact. *g*

Humans are such fragile creatures, no?

eternal_moonie May 18 2010, 08:11:06 UTC

totally AWESOME new Update!!!

ivorykiss June 5 2010, 04:53:54 UTC

Thank you kindly!!

kitmerlot1213 May 18 2010, 12:34:11 UTC

So thrilled that you updated this gorgeous fic!

I do like seeing Clark's being possessive of Chloe and willing to fight for her--about time BDA.

But blood pouring out of Chloe's mouth, eyes and ears has me horrendously worried. Please let us know what has happened to Chloe--and Clark and Biz-- as soon as you can.

simi24 May 20 2010, 05:14:53 UTC

YAY! an update, but Chloe got hurt. doesn't look to good.