Every Last Twisted One Of Them - Bizlark - NC-17 - 01/01

[ivorykiss]

Title: Every Last Twisted One Of Them
Author: ivorykiss
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: graphic descriptions of torture, non-consensual sexual situations
Pairing: Bizlark, allusions to Chlark
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Which may or may not be a good thing, since stuff like might happen if I did.
A/N: This little bit is dark. And wrong. Did I

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

This is an awesome Bizlark fic! Just one question. Who is the she that Bizarro is talking about? Lana or Kara? If you really wanna drive home how wrong and dark it is, my guess is Kara. Awesome fic though!

[ivorykiss]

I'm glad you like it.

LOL! I'll admit that Kara would be darker and wronger, but it was Chloe that Bizzy was taunting Clark with. I'm sorry if it was too vague.

Thanks for commenting!

[eternal_moonie]

It's cool! I'm a Chlarker myself. LOLZ, that I didn't think of her!

[carolandtom]

Ouch, this was painful to read! I admit that I don't like Bizarro, never did. He may have Clark's beautiful features but he's NOT Clark. And in this case, he's hurting my Clark, which makes him really hateful to me. Poor Clark!

I wonder... does Bizarro leave Clark alone to die? Is this a death fic? That'd be too painful! Please, make it better for Clark!

Of course your writing is awesome!

[ivorykiss]

I'll admit, this went even darker than I expected and your comments are greatly appreciated! *huggers*

A death fic? I don't know if I have it in me to kill Clark, at least not for too long.

Again, thanks so much for your kind words!

[tariel22]

I do so like the way you take me places I never realized I wanted to go. *shivers* Thank you!

Dark, and wrong, and hot. Very hot. And I believe the first slashy fic I've ever read by you.

ETA: Of course in my version someone comes to save Clark. I have my limits. :)

[ivorykiss]

Yes, this is my first slashy bit, and I was a little anxious on how it would be received. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, dark and wrong as it was!

Thank you sweetie so much for your kind words!

*smishes*

[chrisluvstommy]

*shivers* oooh that was ummm really good....Bizzy is such a deliciously nasty boy. They way you write is so visual I can picture it perfectly in my mind every twisted detail and that is a good thing :)

[ivorykiss]

I'm so glad you liked! I adore teh Bizzy, and it kinda broke my heart a little to make him so bad. I'm happy you enjoy how I write!

*huggers*

[all_you_wanted]

Whoa...you are just dipping into the dark place, you're full on swimming in it!

Good fic. Disturbing in the imagery (festering is NOT a sexy pron word) but still good. :p

[ivorykiss]

Heh. Guess who's coming in for a week?

What?! Festering is not a sexy pron word? Oops! My bad. *g*

Me glad you likey!