五月的秋千

[ives_gracie]

曾经，曾经，坐上秋千就像有你在我身边
荡着，荡着，秋千的韵律都不曾改变
有你默默地推着我的秋千
在荡到最高点，仿佛看到了另一端的世界

五月的某一天，我深爱的秋千，断了坚固的铁链
我泪流满面，想要接回那断了的生命线
一只手的力量，好比眼镜没有了镜片
慢慢的，我们的手尖，不再十指相见

六月的夏天，秋千堆满了枯黄的树叶
眼镜有了镜片，双手拾起了落叶
我渐渐地把秋千重建

一年后的这个五月，我荡着秋千
看到了从前，从前
我平复了心情，双脚踏着粗糙的原点
身子一前一后，踢着呐喊 “我不会回到从前”

我荡着秋千，期待看得更高更远

Poem was inspired by my old entries, and written on 20 May, 6pm

Comments

[jespy_c]

Cool. ur chinese is PRO! =) i like!

[ives_gracie]

I re-read like 10 times to spot any spelling errors lor, so hard to type chinese

[juthepoo]

wah... :(

[ives_gracie]

Hahaha... wassup with the :(

[joleneliow]

wah liew eh... u damn pro la!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it can be made into a song lor... sure damn fierce!

[ives_gracie]

Need to think of the tune. U help me compose lor

[renrui]

wassup man
that was a good story
that narrated yr whole year

cheer
s

cheer up :) and look forward. don't fall out of that swing.

[ives_gracie]

wun lah. swinging on man!

[bigafeet]

诗情画意marn!

[ives_gracie]

spur of the moment