"For just one Moment'

[iva_o]

Comments

[innuition]

Iva this looks gorgeous, I love the expression of the face and body and I find it very soothing and graceful. I'll ask German about the upper shoulder for you, he's very good with anatomy.

[iva_o]

Thank you ;)
That showder is the one part that is driving me crazy, I gave up on the face, thus it is 'her' now not 'me' ;)
off to sleep for my big day tomorrow

[innuition]

German says:

well the clavicle doesnt match up with the central line of the spine, so her shoulder is disjointed. it need's to be higher up on an angle and a bow shape. i'll do a draw-over in red-line for her if she wants.

does that help?

[innuition]

p.s. best of luck on your 1st big day!!

[mrs_dragon]

From that angle I wouldn't think that you would see the upper shoulder, or see very much of it...mabye you are trying to include too much?

I love the red background--very striking! ^_^

[iva_o]

I painted the showder as it is in the photo I took, yet it does look really off. hmmmm I will probably give it a curve and a bit of shadow. I will let it sit for few day, that usually helps me.

[printedfaces]

I think it is your best painting yet. Good job!

[printedfaces]

But yeah, the upper shoulder is off.

[iva_o]

Thank you very much. It is almost perfect now ;)