Comments | iulia_linnea: At Loose Ends (PG-13; the extended Malfoy family, others; 6517 words)

iulia_linnea

At Loose Ends (PG-13; the extended Malfoy family, others; 6517 words)

Mar 19, 2012 17:02

Title: At Loose Ends
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original female characters, daphne greengrass, scorpius malfoy, severus snape, fic, draco/astoria, narcissa malfoy, severus/daphne, thoroughly inappropriate series, original male characters, astoria greengrass, lucius/narcissa, lucius malfoy, draco malfoy

Comments 8

a_boleyn March 19 2012, 23:34:50 UTC

Dare I say that you've saved the best for last? :) And with the last line, brought the theme of wizarding riddles started in Thoroughly Inappropriate Riddle full circle ( ... )

iulia_linnea March 20 2012, 14:36:09 UTC

I'm so happy that you like it! *squees*

I had a v. simple little ficlet involving a niffler getting loose in Everett's lab and falling into a cauldron of Felix Felicis, thus making it impossible, at least for a while, to catch, but when I sat down to write, this happened. Obviously, I'm still quite engaged in the TIS universe. I may just have to take prompts again.

The Ghoul is still Lucius, but old!Lucius couldn't have been the Ghoul; it interests me to see how he's slowly changed a bit, and why, even if he's still too blind to notice the friend right in front of him.

Thank you for your kind comments! *hugs*

lunafish March 20 2012, 00:06:40 UTC

Aw, I really like seeing this sweet glimpse into Narcissa and Lucius' relationship--and just their whole life together with Not!Severus ;) and Daphne and all the kids.

iulia_linnea March 20 2012, 14:37:06 UTC

Oh, thank you! I'm so pleased that you do. :D

arynwy March 20 2012, 03:12:12 UTC

I love the fact that Lucius has come to the point where he moderates his behavior because he doesn't want to disappoint the children or have them think less of him; that he has realized that he really doesn't have anything in common with his old 'friends', along with the fact that he doesn't even like them.

Along with the realization that Narcissa and the girls have been managing him, he's actually taking all of the changes quite calmly.

Everett is obviously having a marvelous time paying Lucius back for all of his earlier woes as Severus Snape. He knows just how to needle him and there is no way that Lucius can retaliate without looking churlish.

I'm also thinking that Narcissa is well aware of who Everett is and won't say a word - even to Everett.

Yay, for the White Ticket! I wonder if its addition to Severus' old potion is what made the formula safe and viable for Narcissa to use?

Nice work and great addition to the story arc.

iulia_linnea March 21 2012, 16:16:27 UTC

*squees at you*

Thank you so much, arynwy! :D

shiv5468 March 20 2012, 09:20:00 UTC

I do feel sorry for poor old Lucius. Narcissa obviously knows, and Severus is plotting with her behind his back!

iulia_linnea March 21 2012, 16:16:55 UTC

Hee! Thank you. :)