An Unpleasant Scene (PG; Lily Luna, Aunt Luna, Lily Luna's Dad, and a filthy Death Eater; 875 words)

[iulia_linnea]

Title: An Unpleasant Scene
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[a_boleyn]

An unpleasant scene indeed but a lesson needed to be taught about the consequences of one's actions and Luna did it.

[iulia_linnea]

And in a way that Lily Luna's not likely to forget, too. :)

[sexyseverus]

Extremely well written, but as usual, I want to know more. Great job.

[iulia_linnea]

Thank you. :D

[sachael]

A sad but necessary lesson learned. I like that Luna said exactly what she felt and didn't pull any punches because of Lily's youth.

[iulia_linnea]

Thank you. :D Luna's honesty is integral to her personality, I believe.

[arynwy]

Stealing would be a MAJOR flashpoint for Luna, who spent much of her Hogwarts career retrieving items that had been taken from her without permission.

Too bad Lily didn't get a clue the first time she viewed the memory. Snape essentially told her that what she was doing was stupid and wrong with his own testimony. I find the whole thing humorously ironic. Sins of the father and all that. The sad thing is that she didn't have the excuse of a war and information being withheld as an excuse for stealing and stooping.

Nice work.

[iulia_linnea]

I agree, and in Lily Luna's "defense," she's young and has cause to hate Snape, which does nothing for her powers of reason. I think she'll learn this lesson, though.

Thanks!

[mollyssister]

Growing up is such painful business. It appears Miss Potter has loads to do. With any luck she will turn out well. Maybe her "uncle" Severus will have some kind words of advice! lol!

[iulia_linnea]

Oh, dear. I don't think that Severus would be as *coughs* forgiving as Luna. ;)