i have no drawn-out comments, but this was really interesting and i enjoyed reading it. i'm used to writing in this style being vague and symbolic past the point of recognition, and this was a refreshing read for me.
i especially enjoyed these lines:
and in the afterglow brendon sticks to him like spiderwebs, like scars, like words, like all the beautiful things he's ever wanted to say but had to swallow knives to be able to.
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i especially enjoyed these lines:
and in the afterglow brendon sticks to him like spiderwebs, like scars,
like words, like all the beautiful things he's ever wanted to say but had to swallow knives to be able to.
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i enjoy reading things that are written that way too, just things with really wonderful analogies.
:)
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