Comments | itunescuddle: with the hope that you would tame me (2/2). liam/louis, nc-17.

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with the hope that you would tame me (2/2). liam/louis, nc-17.

Jul 05, 2012 13:26

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( with the hope that you would tame me, 2/2. )

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acidsunflower July 5 2012, 13:51:10 UTC

wow. i feel like i'll never be able to look at louis the same way again. hahah im kidding, that was extremely hot for some reason, it's strange for me that louis like getting bashed around to get off but you really make it work. lilo is one of my favourite ships and i absolutely loved it :) i hope you're planning on writing more lilo in the future! x

likecharity July 5 2012, 14:16:09 UTC

Lol, I'm glad you liked it despite being unsure about the kink, thank you! :) I don't have any plans for more Lilo at the moment, but I love the ship so I might end up writing it again if I come up with an idea. And I've been wanting to write Harry/Louis/Liam for ages!

wordgasmic July 5 2012, 14:25:16 UTC

Sigh. Is it weird that I feel calmed by this? Yes, probably. But I was screaming for days on end when I saw you tweet that you were writing Liam/Louis. THIS IS MY VERY FAVORITE PAIRING, and just like with your Harry/Liam fic, I love how you worked the significant others into this. The very best thing about Liam/Louis fics for me is when Harry gets so flawlessly added in there as the best friend that is also sort of the boyfriend, only not really. I don't know, I just LOVE the dynamic of it. And of course, the actual topic here of Louis needing Liam so much was absolutely great and you always write the D/s aspects so well. Basically I am just screaming and crying about how you write the best things and now with the pairings and I'm incoherent but thank you and goodnight.

likecharity July 5 2012, 17:40:44 UTC

Eee oh my god thank you. ♥ So glad you liked this. And I'm especially glad to hear you liked what I did with the significant others because I struggled with that so much - I'd just figured out how to fit Danielle and Harry into it and then I was like OH SHIT, HANNAH. :| And yeah, the only way I could write Harry and Louis's dynamic without it getting super complicated and angsty was to just make them really intensely close friends, basically in a relationship but not quite. Thanks again!! :)

thesilverwitch July 5 2012, 15:02:56 UTC

the best part about this story is that while it's mostly smut there's still so much plot and feelings and you did such a good job omg

likecharity July 5 2012, 17:41:31 UTC

Thank you!! ♥ I'm really glad you liked it.

nainai96 July 5 2012, 16:24:05 UTC

oh.my.gawd. this is the best smutty thing i've ever read. you balanced the plot with porn and it was magical.

likecharity July 5 2012, 17:42:25 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥

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likecharity July 5 2012, 17:45:57 UTC

Eeee thank you so much bb. ♥ The whole coping mechanism thing actually just sort of came about as I was writing it, it wasn't even going to be more than a kink but it just made so much sense and rounded the whole thing out. The only way I can really see sub!Louis is like this, needing someone else to take control of him just so that he can relax. He really is a lot quieter in interviews where he's on his own. Like, I think he IS genuinely a bit of a weirdo and everything but I do think it's become a sort of mask for him and he might not even realise that because he's so used to it? UGH HE'S SO FASCINATING.

I'm so glad you liked this and that you felt affected by their dynamic even though you don't really ship them that much, yay. :D