state of flux (1/2). ot5/ofc, nc-17.

[likecharity]

Title: state of flux
Author: likecharity
Pairing: One Direction/OFC, with strong OT5 undertones (particular focus on Harry/Louis and Zayn/Liam)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Group sex and a bit of open voyeurism/exhibitionism
Summary: This girl has brought to light something none of them has ever really questioned before, something about their

Comments

[teaatsix]

*flailing*

off to read

[likecharity]

*crosses fingers* I HOPE YOU LIKE IT

[betsyisawesome]

yes good i think we all need more ot5 porn in our lives

and 15,000+ words of it!!!

[likecharity]

:D

WE DO INDEED

[eviljellybean88]

wow, i was hesitant to read this cuz i don't want OFCs to turn into mary sues, but i should have known that you would do a fabulous job :D

[likecharity]

Thank you!! I've never written an OFC in a fic before except in passing mention, and I got pretty stressed about it because I didn't want her to come across as a Mary Sue, so I'm glad you thought I did well. :)

[eviljellybean88]

yeah, i was srsly not going to read this when i saw the OFC, but it's you and i love everything you write so i figured i'd give it a chance and it has turned out to be one of my very favorites fics ever so that just proves to never judge a fic by it's pairings lol

[likecharity]

Yeah, I knew I was taking a risk there because I figured a lot of people would be put off by the pairing, so I'm glad you took a chance on it. :)

[kay18jay]

Pausing to catch my breath before going on to part 2. Holy crap, you wrote her perfectly. the moment of shyness is so fetching.

[likecharity]

Eee, thank you so much. ♥ I never write OFCs and I was worried she'd just turn into a Mary Sue or be really obnoxious or something. It was SO hard.

[kay18jay]

She was perfect! She's like the epitome of everything a fangirl who ships herself with each of them, wants to be to each of the boys. She's like an... amalgam...(?) kwim?
oh, and the name? Max? please, tell me that you picked a boys name on purpose? awesome. I noticed another commenter say she was smitten with her. Totally.

[likecharity]

I totally picked a unisex name on purpose! XD

[badjujuboo]

had to pause for a moment when I WAS OVER COME WITH LIAM FEELS
"Max, um, can I-" Liam murmurs then and Niall doesn't think he's ever heard his voice sound like that before, thick somehow, heavy. But then he remembers that one time he dropped by Liam's hotel room unexpectedly and he heard voices coming from inside and he thought maybe Liam was doing a twitcam, and then when Liam let him in he was flustered and pink-cheeked and his laptop was shut and his voice sounded a lot like it does now. At the time Niall assumed that it had something to do with Danielle and Skype and probably masturbating and he's pleased to discover that he was right, because this is clearly Liam's Sex Voice.

sex voice, for some reason it STUPIDLY hit me that Liam actually has one of those, and then i saw stars and had to lay down for a while LOL

[likecharity]

HAHA ngl writing Liam in a sexual context was tricky because I kept seeing stars too. SIGH

[badjujuboo]

i just... i love all of them, dearly I DO, but LIAM - stupid hair and his NICEness and then you say SEX VOICE and its like my brain literally can NOT compute that lol

[likecharity]

BELIEVE ME I KNOW

I think this must be the reason there isn't more Liam smut; WE CAN'T HANDLE IT