5:15

Aug 25, 2013 14:12



Title: 5:15
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "I'll say it one last time. I’m walking out the door at 4:59."(  )

yongseo, 5:15, yonghwa/seohyun

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ext_2070516 August 25 2013, 18:56:46 UTC
Okay girl you can write angst! And this us just based on a song ^^ like your previous story,it is well written and I am comparing this to many other YS fanfics I read. You shod write more. Fluffy perhaps? Or YS in real life =)

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itsmewhitney August 28 2013, 11:28:05 UTC
More pancakes? haha I'll try. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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babypillow August 25 2013, 23:56:03 UTC
wow short and intense! actually i was hoping she would leave at 4.59 , if not 5.15 the latest!! please give us more - she can't be a doormat!!!! love it!!!and thank you!

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itsmewhitney August 28 2013, 11:33:44 UTC
I'm glad you're interested. I did write more, on your request. I hope she's not too doormat-esque for your taste. Thank you for reading and leaving feedback! Greatly appreciated.

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Re: I'm hooked! itsmewhitney August 28 2013, 11:37:00 UTC
You wanted it, so there's now a sequel. However, I'm not sure it's that great big happy ending you envisioned. So glad you decided to read and leave feedback! Thank you for both! ^^

Cheers!

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snccrockz September 3 2013, 01:48:03 UTC
Oh snap, that was painful. I'm glad there's a continuation for this.

I can feel Seohyun's pain and frustration, and I wanna slap Yonghwa into action....however I am one of those who is not punctual, and I'm working on it, so that's the ONLY reason I want Yonghwa to have a chance to make this sh*tty mistake up ;)

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itsmewhitney September 7 2013, 01:08:49 UTC
I have a problem with tardiness as well. I am almost always late for school. Like you, I'm trying to be more punctual, but my body just refuses to listen to me. Anyway, thank you for reading (again) :)

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