He lives in hope.

[itsjustc]

.“Truth, dare, kiss, or promise, Zac?” she asks me

Comments

[bleodswean]

This was a really fun read with just the right hooks. You had complete control over it! I liked the originality of the idea! Live and learn.

[itsjustc]

Thank you for your comment I really appreciate it. It is definitely the most cutesy, sugary, thing I have ever written! But I did enjoyed trying to imagine a young boy thought pattern.

[halfshellvenus]

Poor, poor Zac! So young, so earnest, so hopelessly besotted with Lily, and she honestly isn't very nice to him.

If only the dare had been to kiss Zac. THAT would have been a smarter choice. ;)

[itsjustc]

Haha! I think that's what I originally I had in mind for him as I wrote the first draft but then realised that the story was extremely short and it didn't really go anywhere so I changed him from being smarter to being a bit stupid instead xx

[rayaso]

This was so bittersweet! You caught this period in their lives so well -- but alas for Zack. I liked the dialog and the ending. Great job!