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Apr 08, 2009 14:33

Title: There Was a Young Trooper...
Author: mad_jaks
Characters: Jack/John Hart
Genre: drabble
Rating: PG13
Prompt: tw100: poetry
Summary: A very mellow John Hart waxes lyrical - limerickal? - about the old days
Author's Note: If you could all bear with me until I get my writing mojo back I would be most grateful.
Disclaimer: Not mine - making no money

There was a young trooper from Boeshane... )

jack/john hart, drabble, torchwood

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kel_reiley April 8 2009, 14:01:16 UTC
awww... that was kinda sweet - i likes it!

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itsarift_thing April 8 2009, 14:20:58 UTC
Thansk, sweet and John Hart really shouldn't go together I know that but my brain overruled me :D

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kel_reiley April 8 2009, 14:25:20 UTC
i think it fits a 'them' in the past, before they became who they are

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itsarift_thing April 8 2009, 14:31:45 UTC
Oh yeah, a younger them when John was feeling 'kind' - before shit happened and hardcore bitterness crept in.

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donutsweeper April 8 2009, 14:12:34 UTC
*snickers* Oh boys

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itsarift_thing April 8 2009, 14:22:57 UTC
*VBG*
Everyone should be allowed moments of happy drunkenness every now and again, or so my brain says.

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snakewhissperer April 8 2009, 14:33:09 UTC
*grins* that is bad...and i can't see him as a boy scout..ever..although JB in shorts? Mmm.

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itsarift_thing April 8 2009, 14:43:04 UTC
haha

Jack would have so been an actual Boy Scout - his mum would have baked cookies for him to sell and everything :D

Please, no, not adult leader uniform scout shorts!!!! *is appalled*

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snakewhissperer April 8 2009, 15:14:43 UTC
no, but any kind of shorts....legs...*drools*

Actually thats the scary thing......and Jack as a boy scout? oh boy could he sell cookies..i'm sure.

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rustydog April 8 2009, 16:10:35 UTC
Hee! This is great. I especially like Jack's reactions. "I'm never drinking with you again!"

And I agree, Jack could have been very boyscoutish once upon a time.

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itsarift_thing April 8 2009, 16:13:33 UTC
It's where he first learned to fix stuff, tie knots and generally, all round, be prepared for anything. All very useful for the life of a conman and later, life aboard the TARDIS ;-)

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tardistenantsue April 8 2009, 18:25:25 UTC
Thank you for this! This little limerick helped me to decode a bit I was having trouble with in my story! You are awesome!

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itsarift_thing April 9 2009, 08:37:20 UTC
Not often you can say that about a spot of nonsense!

*is intrigued*

&
Thank you

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itsarift_thing July 13 2009, 07:50:03 UTC
Hey did you ever finish this story? If you did, could you link me, please??

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tardistenantsue July 13 2009, 08:08:09 UTC
Actually, after events in the recent past - this community was made for those stories: http://community.livejournal.com/coffeeflvrdkiss/

Come on over and read, I will be putting up the second story in the series - which is still in progress later today...we'd love to have you!

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