If Life is But a Dream [EXO]

[its_rayning]

Suho/Kai
NC-17 (!) dubious-consent, handjobs
~3200w
When Jongin opens his eyes, the room is way too bright despite the fact that it's dark and the light's not on-but Jongin's still seeing white. Joonmyeon's face clears up in a moment and his expression is frightened and sad and scared.

Remix of let your dreams carry you at kpop_ficmix. Beta'ed by Simone and Dirah

Comments

[eoryndal]

spot :D I think you're my lucky charm <3

[eoryndal]

RAYYYY /throwing myself at you sobbing happily
It's as if Christmas is two month early. *___*
You saved my day! <3

Where do I even start?!
Hahaha, I love bratty prince Sehun in the beginning. And both he an Jongin thinking they're smarter than the other, smh xD
The things Jongin puts up with to get closer to Joonmyun. (Because this is Jongin, he can't just use any normal means. xD )

he expects Jongin to do as he says because as much as Jongin's independent, he knows that he'll follow directions
Aww <3 Because it's Joonmyun who's giving the directions.
I really am convinced that Jongin is the one who causes the least trouble in K. (Most people would probably say Kyungsoo but honestly, that boy's just too good at making people believe he's innocent.)

Jongin looks small, so very tiny in his bed, and it’s a little bit too cute for this time of the evening.
and
Jongin rarely ever actually calls him ‘hyung’-not in that soft, small voice of his that seems desperate and sweet at the same time.
HE'S SO PRECIOUS ;____; <3 AKSDJAKJFHKAFHAF

[its_rayning]

;A; I'm so glad you liked it :D Especially since you're the one supplying the sukai most of the time ;_____; This made me really happy because the person I originally wrote this for hasn't commented so ; ~ ; this makes up for it <3

Glad you liked bratty!Sehun lol. I had my irl friend look this over, and she said that that part was a little confusing, so i'm glad you got it :D

I really am convinced that Jongin is the one who causes the least trouble in K. (Most people would probably say Kyungsoo but honestly, that boy's just too good at making people believe he's innocent.)
I think so too, if you're looking at Jongin and not Kai. I mean, I don't even like Kai. :/ And Kyungsoo, honestly he's a sweetheart but he can't be that innocent. There should be a slutty/badass/causing-messes-in-a-domestic-au someday :D (or maybe I'll write it lmao)

Yay, all those things were totally intended, and i hoped to get those reactions from someone (so glad it was you) :D

tysm honey ;____; <3

[eoryndal]

And here I go still claiming I don't have an OTP ^^" Who am I kidding? xD

I don't think it's confusing. I can totally see Sehun being like that. Especially putting his legs on the table when no one is around who would scold him. Sneaky brat xD

I disliked Kai at first, too. But I have to give him props for working so hard and putting so much energy into his performances. And I think it's really good that he's there for Jongin, protecting him... Oops, shit, did my secret Kai/Jongin feeling show?! Ack /hides

(YES WRITE IT *____* )

The way you wrote it, how could I not get all those feelings?! sakdahjsfhgja <3

[its_rayning]

really, are you sure????

my mindset was:

hmmm, what would simone do...?

[its_rayning]

oh y e a h I didn't think of it like that. I would rather be able to write 40k then not :(

GOOD ;A; Jongin is best being more cuddly than Joonmyeon sometimes u__u

[sendandreceive]

ahhhh this is lovely and almost fluffy in the best of ways and omfg suho hiding under the duvet is like the cutest thing ever?? aglsdkh

loved this, thanks for writing <3

[its_rayning]

ahhhh, duvet was the word I was looking for! I couldn't think of the word besides 'comforter'. glad you liked that :D imagining him hiding is just too adorable ;____;

thank you for reading honey <3

[precious_0ne]

SPOT! OH RAY ;_; WHAT DID YOU DO?! Now I'm off to sleep, but I'm not finished here! :D

[its_rayning]

I hope you like it Sodary <3 ;___; good night!

[precious_0ne]

BACK!

D-did Kai let himself be bribed by doing Sehun's HOMEWORK?! Oh evil maknae... and poor Kai: his love for Suho must make him so naive. But I love it kekeke~!

because as much as Jongin's independent, he knows that he'll follow directions (though not particularly when it comes to his health, Joonmyeon thinks, chagrin coming out)

FEELS ;~;

He can spot the little specks of dirt on the cloth...and that one particular spot where he had been dreaming, so heavenly, of little Jongin; and he flushes even more this time.

SEE? These subtleties, I don't get them when I'm half-asleep, BUT NOW I CAN, and they're awesome! Why did I never think of that?! Oh mature Suho.

And Kai being so small and so vulnerable, and why do I love him so much?! Suho being so stupid when he's taken aback by Kai's presence. These two stupid fools ♥

(And calling him "hyung". Feels, I tell you.)

Joonmyeon wants to hide, so he does, and grabs the comforter from the floor, shoving it over his head.I would do that. I totally feel you, Suho

[its_rayning]

SEE? These subtleties, I don't get them when I'm half-asleep, BUT NOW I CAN, and they're awesome! Why did I never think of that?! Oh mature Suho.
Same here lmao OTL I never notice when I read fics drowsily.

(And calling him "hyung". Feels, I tell you.)
Jongin calling him Joonmyeon hyung is like, my weakness ;____; I crey it’s just so cute.

You probably killed eoryndal with this. Just saying. She really has a thing for Suho's thighs... and hips... and lower body in general, although she insists that she likes his face too XD. I LOVE thighs (especially Suho’s and Xiu Min’s ; ~~~ ; \ /\ / OTL) Suho deserves the body-love though, he doesn’t have too many fans gushing over it unlike Kai u__u

I really like how awkward it is. It's kind of innocent? And so them ^^ It’s official… every single person that’s ever read my fics has called them awkward, yet cute. Idek. Thanks though <3

I must congratulate you on this kissing scene. There isn't enough description of kissing in smut scenes in general and there should be because they're so

[dee_fml]

I think I died and went to heaven.

I read Let Your Dreams Carry You months ago and I was in love with how sweet and delicate it was...
but OMG! I think I just fell headfirst for this.

The beginning was cute and sweet, then it went to a full on sexy, hot, yet at the same time fluffy. I can't even...

perverted!Joonmyun
Then childlike!Joonmyun. I want to squish him, then punch him for being the cutest little poop ever.

Jongin being all 'actions speak louder than words.' It is so him to prefer acting on it than talking over the issue.
Spot on characterization. I commend you for that. And bratty!Sehun. Bless him and give him more bubble tea.

I really loved this!^^ Thank you so much for writing this.
It feels like drinking hot cocoa on a rainy day. All these warm, fuzzy (and sexy) feelings.

[its_rayning]

Um, Let Your Dreams Carry You? Did I write that...? I don't...think so? I don't recognize the name. Is it a SuKai fic?

I'm so glad you liked this <3

being the cutest little poop ever. Oh! That's the best way to describe joonmyeon tbh ;___; little poop. urhguah so cute haaha.

Huahsduf lol, every time I write smut, it always ends up a little fluffy orz. I'm glad my characterization was spot on! I've never been complimented for that before, so that makes me so happy :) Bratty!Sehun is real sehun tbh <3

I'm so glad you liked this, honey! <3 Thank you for reading.