[Mini-Series] Undeniable Sin - Part 03

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Disclaimer: So I've been thinking about it and I think it's important to mention that there are some religious aspects in this chapter, and for that reason I feel like I should have some form of disclaimer. It is not my intent to offend anyone with this story.

Title: Undeniable Sin
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin
Genre: Angst, Drama
Rating: R
Warnings:

Comments

[kimheechulmiki]

ouch! it hurts! love the way you write YooChun saying goodbye to ChangMin and ChangMin confused bewildered expressions. woah! Love this chapter although it left a pain in my heart, I feel sorry for both of them.
Is Chunnie really, really leaving? Turn back! Make a u turn! TT^TT Thanks for a lovely update.

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Yoochun is leaving... but we shall see how long it takes before Changmin comes back and tortures him some more! *hugs*

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

[atobekazuki]

Ohhhhhh my heart. ;o;

Right at the end, you broke my heart. I wonder what will happen to Changmin and Yoochun. Being separated from each other and all.

This was a beautiful chapter...and the religious aspect doesn't offend me, so you are in the clear with me. lol

♥♥♥ Can't wait for the next chapter.

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I'm glad there was no offending ♥

Next chapter will be the start of their separation... we shall see how it develops XD

Thank you for reading!!

[pawshingo]

I can just picture Changmin struggling to free himself from the blanket and trying to run after Yoochun.The pain and confusion on his face and in his heart must be tremendous! Poor kid! Yoochun's own struggle to leave his room was great, how will he survive being away from Changmin? I so love how you described Yoochun watching a sleeping Changmin and how he woke up. That was really nice! Another bit I liked was 'Through the dusty layer on his windshield he can feel his grief.'Magnificent!

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The dreaded separation will definitely be hard... but we'll soon see how it works out for the both of them :)

Thank you so much for your lovely comments!! I always appreciate them very much ♥

[roseltv]

It's ok going to hell if you're going with your loved one XD.

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That is definitely putting a positive spin on things! :D

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*hugs*