'At The Edge Of Heaven' (02/??)

[ithildyn]

Rating: PG13
Characters: Dr. Robert Helm, Colonel Luis Montoya, Captain Marcus Grisham, Tessa Alvarado, Marta, OFC
Summary: Isabelle does her best to settle into her new life in California, while her brother Robert once more aids the Queen of Swords -- aid that inadvertently places Isabelle in a dangerous situation and puts her squarely in the

Comments

[catyuy]

And finally Helm shows up.
Now the question is, when will Tessa or the Queen pop up?

[ithildyn]

You'll have to wait and see :)

[sophiedb]

I like Isabelle :)

[ithildyn]

This is a good thing :)

[em_kellesvig]

Oh, this is very good! I like the additions! And Isabelle as well. :)

[ithildyn]

Glad you're pleased :)

[birggitt]

I wholeheartedly agree dear Helm here. I should be quite a show to see someone trying to stop Isabelle *g*
I like a lot how you portray their relationship, Robert trying to keep Isabelle at bay, but charmed for her. And the love between them is evident.
I'm liking this story a lot =D

[ithildyn]

I'm glad you're enjoying this :) There's so much setup I need to do before I get to what I consider the meat of the story, so I was worried it might be too slow.

[birggitt]

Well, you know what Methos would had say: "What is the first rule of great drama? Start small, and build"

[ithildyn]

True :) I just hope I can hold everyone's interest.

[dejla]

Don't know how I missed this. But I'm really enjoying this. I always love 'the biter bit' stories.

[ithildyn]

I think you were on vacation :)

'biter bit'?

[dejla]

Maybe it's not a real term, but it's what I call the kind of story where the antagaonist (it's pretty hard to call Montoya a hero) starts out doing something for his own purposes (like flirting with Isabelle) and then finds himself doing it for other purposes entirely (like falling for Isabelle).

[ithildyn]

Oh! I see [g] Caught in his own trap. Would serve him right!