Comments | ithildyn: 'Equivocal Coalescence' (01/08)

ithildyn

'Equivocal Coalescence' (01/08)

Mar 10, 2013 12:20

I'm more than 5000 words into this, so decided to start posting since it's nearing completion. Just not sure how many parts it'll be broken into quite yet - 4, or maybe 5. With Iron Man III fast approaching, I really felt the urge to get this arc wrapped up ( Read more... )

fic: highlander, charlotte sparrow, phil coulson, fic: iron man, methos, series: 'echoes the sea', james rhodes, natasha romanoff, ezra standish, nick fury, fic

Comments 6

jedimasterstar March 11 2013, 05:37:40 UTC

This is very good. You are doing an excellent weaving this in to the movie so far. Most people tend to rewrite movies and shows to fit their needs. It's wonderful to see you putting scenes inbetween scenes (did that come out right?).

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

ithildyn March 11 2013, 05:53:21 UTC

Yes! Scenes between scenes-that's exactly it. The next part was extra that, since I wanted t incorporate actual lines from the movie, Hope you like it!

mizz_destiny March 13 2013, 01:19:08 UTC

Charlotte told him off for his Congress shenanigans! Huzzah!

ithildyn March 15 2013, 00:58:53 UTC

I have to admit, the telling off was quite satisfying :D

i_llbedammned March 13 2013, 01:56:09 UTC

Charlotte and Tony's banter back and forth amuses me.

Of course Tony was like a teenage boy in front of the senate.

I did not see him stepping down from being the head of Stark Industries.

I just feel like this is all building up to a tragedy. There are so many good things going, but things rarely stay good. These scenes were nice and comforting though.

ithildyn March 15 2013, 01:00:27 UTC

Thank you :)

I figured I needed to get this IM II centric sequel out of the way before IM III comes out and guts me!