TTOI FIC: Two's Company (Part 3)

Aug 17, 2010 19:40

Title: Two's Company... (Chapter 3 of 4)
Fandom: The Thick of It
Pairings: Malcolm/Olly/Jamie
Rating: NC-17 - Porn, porn and more porn. Did I mention porn? 
Summary: Jamie thinks Malcolm wants Olly, Malcolm thinks Jamie wants Olly, and, well, Olly get's them both... 
Notes: Wonderfully betaed by Read more... )

the thick of it: fic

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nomness August 17 2010, 20:40:13 UTC
Holy mother of...everything holy. That was hot. And wonderfully awkward and real. And so IC. And then there's a morning after.

Jamie hasn’t the heart to tell him no.
This. Their entire whatever/relationship is second guessing what the other wants.

...the dopey swine...
Awww...

And such timing because I'd just reread the first two parts in the hopes of a new installment!

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itchy_stitches August 17 2010, 22:56:30 UTC
This. Their entire whatever/relationship is second guessing what the other wants.

Yes! If only they would bloody talk to each other like normal human beings!

The last part is mostly written so there shouldn't be too long to wait.

Thank you for commenting :)

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honeyfitz August 17 2010, 22:15:35 UTC
I'm quite stunned by this. When I started watching TToI I never expected there to be fic out there, let alone slash. And I NEVER, EVER expected it to be this deliciously hot.

Seriously. You've made a very fed-up girl EXTREMELY grinny XD

It's bookmarked, it's due for a re-read (after all, it's been about 20 minutes since I read it) and it's spurring me on to look at my WIPs and sort the heck out of them.

Thankyou, thankyou *gushes embarrassingly*

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itchy_stitches August 17 2010, 22:54:41 UTC
Thank you so much :D I am extremely flattered by your lovely comments!

If posting this makes you revisit your WIPs, then I have definitely done my good deed for the day.

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honeyfitz August 17 2010, 23:03:40 UTC
Oh, I could gush more if you pushed me ;)

I'm fed up of having ideas for fics then doing nothing with them. I don't know where my muse has gone, but I feel like sporking her :( I spend ages thinking about ideas, but don't get as far as writing them. Plus I'm quite new to TToI and want to make sure I've got my characters bang on, as you and others have :)

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itchy_stitches August 17 2010, 23:46:28 UTC
Well - believe me - it took me quite a while to start writing properly (i.e. actually spending time to write something, rather than knocking something out overnight and just posting it.)

I read a lot of amazing fics and they have all helped to get the characters right - as well as watching the TV series a little too much! haha

If you ever need anybody to run your ideas by, then I wholeheartedly offer my services ;)

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icecrystal2k August 18 2010, 10:14:47 UTC
Oh, my. *brain is in orbit somewhere* That was marvelous. I love the dynamics between the three of them. Jamie waking Malcolm, and that whole scene with them in the dawn is wonderful, and then jealousy returns. Oh, Malcolm.

Can't wait for part four. &hearts

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patsch August 18 2010, 12:03:32 UTC
Good God, you've actually written Malcolm/Olly/Jamie porn. What have you done? lol This is amazing. I mean, the sex, obviously, but also the rest. Wow.

I love that Olly's somewhat aware of what's actually happening. But mostly I just adore Malcolm and Jamie in this. They're so beautifully screwed up. The last bit was just wonderful. (Damn you, Olly!)

“Is this what you fuckin’ wanted?” he says, a mere whisper, obviously referring to Olly, to the three of them and what they’re going to do.

Jamie hasn’t the heart to tell him no.

Ouch.

I cannot wait to see how you will end this. Really cannot wait. :D

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itchy_stitches August 25 2010, 16:56:03 UTC
I'm sorry you've had to wait so long for the next part! I've been away and haven't been able to write anything at all - I should at least have it up by the end of the week though.

Thank you for your lovely words :D

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bluejam1980 August 23 2010, 00:47:05 UTC
That whole bit of Malcolm dialogue between him telling Ollie to stand up and Malc calling him a whore is one of my favorite bits of Malcolm dialogue I've ever read.

It's exactly how you'd imagine him dealing with Ollie's comment, and the whole of the rest of the story is great too.
(I'm becoming increasingly interested in Jamie, and he's brilliant in this).

Nice one. : )

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itchy_stitches August 25 2010, 16:54:12 UTC
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments :)

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