The Change

[infinitas]

He was driving Jasper insane; he knew that. So much so, after directing a chilling glare at him, Jasper left the house to hunt. Inevitably, Alice was annoyed at him as well. Ever since she had that vision, she had been bouncing up and down non-stop, doing ‘preparations’, as she called them. After frowning at him and accusing him of not trusting her

Comments

[poetrytoprose]

Ah! You continue to write these two so well. You really do have these two characters down -- from the light banter to the underlying feelings they both have. Your writing is absolutely wonderful, I'm about to read everything I've missed so far.

Consider posting your writing to lion_lamb? We can always use some great stuff like this. :)

[infinitas]

Thank you! That was really a huge compliment! There are quite a number of Twilight fics here... :)

Of course. I have joined it already. XD

[dior_anghel]

I love the last line. This is really well-written. Good job!

But just so you know - "Do you really one this?" - I think you mean "Do you really want this?"

[infinitas]

Thank you so much for pointing that out to me! I was in a rush to get them out yesterday, and sometimes I really type too fast for my own good. :D

[daydreamrachey]

amazing.

[infinitas]

Thanks!

[anonymous]

awe you write these two very well!!! is there going to be another chapter after this?

[infinitas]

Nope. It's a one-shot. :)

[infinitas]

Thank you!