Comments | ita_saku: yo!

cuito in ita_saku

yo!

Nov 06, 2004 00:13

Well, I thought that maybe I should share a little something with you lovely folks. Here's a little story, which will become a doujinshi in the near future. I did this before going to work, but I didn't have time to post it up until now. It's just drabble at the moment, I’m not sure if I’m going to add more or not. This actually happens to be a ( Read more... )

subjects: offspring, genre: romance, sub-ch: sasuke, sub-pair: sasusaku, subjects: family, fw: fanfic

Comments 4

kylara November 6 2004, 22:22:13 UTC

Wow. I really like this, I've read it three time today and it's still good. It's so nice in its simplicity. I especially enjoyed when Sasuke showed up, and the daughter's reaction.

>> All he could make out was “daddy this”, “daddy that”, and “daddy, daddy, daddy”.

That was very nice, very telling.

Oh my gosh, I don't know what else to say. I just really liked this! I can't wait to see the doujinshi, so don't forget to post it ;)

And thank you for sharing this with us!

cuito November 6 2004, 23:39:47 UTC

Thank you!!! ^_^

Although I just noticed when I mention Sasuke as "him" or "he" it didn't show up in italics, weird...

I had a bunch of sketches of Itachi and Aiko together, but I can't find them and I also have a couple of Itachi and Sakura pics, but I can't find those either. I seem to be misplacing everything lately.

_r0ckershik028_ November 15 2004, 02:11:02 UTC

Oh my God! This is so great. So, Aiko is Sasuke's baby?? Right?!

And OMG again, Itachi was soo sweet even though it isn't mentioned that it was really itachi... I hope you construct another chapter... I really wanna know what will happen if they live together in one roof.

Oh, How about a prequel?? Because I think it's also interesting. Itachi and Sakura meeting up together and anything...

GREAT JOB!!

cuito November 15 2004, 02:40:28 UTC

Thank you!
Aiko is Sasuke's baby, but Itachi took his place as her father. ^_^