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istne_pieklo

Naruto: Slow Journey to the Core [Madara]

Jun 25, 2010 00:52

Title: “Slow Journey to the Core”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: G
Summary: Everything that Madara hates is incidentally centred around one person. [Vague spoilers for Chapter 499]
Disclaimer: Naruto is Kishimoto Masashi’s playground.
A/N: I hate my life right now, so here’s this semi-old plotless, pointless Maddy-centric piece.

( There's a whole lotta hate going on )

anime, gen, naruto, fanfiction

Comments 19

indira14 June 24 2010, 22:05:19 UTC

It should be fun to break him.

But it’s not.

*____* I'm speechless right now. Oh, you portray Madara so well and the colours and those dialogues in the brackets and adfhsadf.hdms, because seriously, I think awed incohorency and I are becoming fast friends! This is amazing.

istne_pieklo June 25 2010, 06:47:41 UTC

Aww, thank you, darling! <3

3headed June 24 2010, 23:04:53 UTC

Thanks for fueling my obsession with this character over and over again.
Oh, and I love this btw!

istne_pieklo June 25 2010, 06:44:24 UTC

LOL, you're welcome))))
Thanks for reading! :))

ylmik_wisty June 24 2010, 23:28:32 UTC

Ah, ah. So many great images. I liked this phrase a lot: carnivorous world of shinobi. It just sounds so nice in my head, lyrical almost.

istne_pieklo June 25 2010, 06:46:06 UTC

Hahaha, when I read it separately, it sort of reminds me of the Krakken)))) OR some other creepy tentacle-y beastie.
Thanks for reading! XD

prettypriestess June 25 2010, 00:51:01 UTC

Oh~! Hon, this was glorious. The imagery is much... brighter. More familiar, brilliant with a sharper edge than most hate-based imagery, and the last line--

♥

istne_pieklo June 25 2010, 06:56:27 UTC

Thank you! XDD I think it's natural that Madara's hate should be sharper and brighter; he's had years to wallow in all kinds of it)) Sasuke's would probably be dull, cold, and black)))

kalliel June 25 2010, 02:42:03 UTC

I love your sensory 'personification,' so to speak, of Madara's hatred. Every line has this gorgeous specificity and freshness (that I find characteristic of all of your descriptive writing, frankly!). But to get so much of it, and have its power only grow, rather than become overbearing, is an absolute treat.

And this is so perfectly Madara:
(You dare!.. the creature bellows. Madara answers conceitedly: I dare.)

Excellent line.

Thank you for writing this!

istne_pieklo June 25 2010, 06:51:34 UTC

Thank you, darling! <3 You're definitely making me blush now... I honestly didn't think this piece would be so well-received. *_*
Hahaha, I guess that's part of what I love about Madara: he dares. A lot)))
Thank you for reading! <3