Suigetsu-centric fic: Come With Me

[istne_pieklo]

Title: “Come With Me”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: PG-13 [attempted suicide]
Timeline: five years post-canon
Summary: It’s been five years since they last saw each other, but nothing changes. When Sasuke calls, Suigetsu still comes. Please R&R!
Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Kishimoto Masashi. Quotes from chapters 417 (Karin and Juugo) and 346 (Sasuke

Comments

[syrraki]

Kyaaa, you know, I really like Suigetsu, but there aren't enough fic with him in.
The idea behind this is really really good, about who we follow and why. The bits about Naruto are good, and I think it's better that we don't get any answers at the end. Your description of older Sasuke was very short, but gave a vivid image so yeah.

“I must be crazy,” Suigetsu mutters, “if I’m even considering this. Walking beside you again. Who do you want to kill this time?”

“No one,” Sasuke replies.

“That’s new.” Suigetsu blinks

XD

“If you like, I can kill you myself,” Sasuke says. “Later. I need you now.”

ALSO XD

the only bit I had any issue with was the Suigetsu crying, esPECIALLY in front of Sasuke. I just can't see him doing it, no matter how overwhelmed, I can't see his pride letting him. BUT it's your baby :) Thanks for sharing.

[istne_pieklo]

I looove Suigetsu))) And I really miss him. XDD Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I understand issues with the crying Suigetsu))) I think it's pretty unlikely indeed, but he can always say later that it was just water))) Besides, he's just tried to kill himself, and I can barely see him do that too)))) The fic was written very quickly, on a spur of moment, and everything in it takes place on a spur of moment too, so I thought: why the hell not? The entire situation is pretty freaky)))) His brains melted into the water and then got back together))) I don't suppose he really could control himself at that moment.

[sowell]

Aw, I adore Suigetsu. And I love the idea that his team comes to be important to him, that he would deeply mourn if they died. I know he's a semi-villain, but I want a happy ending for him in the end.

And he totally wants Sasuke.

I loved his reflections on Naruto, and all the description of him blending into water. This was great.

[istne_pieklo]

I think even a semi-villain is too strong for him))) He's just bored. And violent))) But who isn't in the Mist Village? They all seem to like chopping people to pieces))) That's why it's good that Suigetsu stays with Sasuke: SAsuke doesn't encourage his tendencies)))))))
And he totally wants Sasuke. Muhahahah, yeeesssss! XDDD
Thank you for reading, darling! <3

[ylmik_wisty]

“If you like, I can kill you myself,” Sasuke says. “Later. I need you now.”

Aahhh, Sasuke. <33 He is so... a;lskdjf. I love that line.

And I like the setup, Suigetsu letting himself disentigrate just the moment Sasuke comes to get him after five years. I like the observations Suigetsu made about the changes in Sasuke, too. No crest, and not trying to kill anybody! XD

Interesting piece :3

[istne_pieklo]

LOOOL)))) He's very caring, isn't he? XDD
But really, it's scary that Sasuke still gathers ppl around him despite doing anything for it))) Suigetsu may say whatever he likes, but after Killer Bee I do believe that Hawk is a real team and they're all attached to each other)))
Thank you so much for reading! <3

[premium_shaday]

Whew.
That was really good.

[istne_pieklo]

Thank you very much! =))

[helike]

This kid here had killed Momochi Zabuza.

erm... Where did he get that idea from? o_O; It was not quite like that...

“Were you trying to kill yourself by drowning?

Nice point here XD Really nice one XD

I’m not here to play twenty questions, Suigetsu.

Somebody is not amused...

Who do you want to kill this time?”
“No one,” Sasuke replies.
“That’s new.”

That's indeed new o_O
And what happened to Naruto o_O

Good job, honey :)

[istne_pieklo]

Well, he knew Sasuke was part of the team that defeated Zabuza. The rest is technicalities. XD
Hahaha, Sasu-chan is never amused))
Sui doesn't know what happened to Naruto; hence we don't either)))) It's a mystery.
Thank you, darling! <3

[helike]

yeah... Technicalities... Some ninja should really care more about that little thing called "information gathering" ^^;

C'mon... you're the writer here - you should know XD

You're welcome :)

[istne_pieklo]

Darling, would you rather I wrote smth long and tedious like: This kid was on the team that took out Zabuza who then died? XDD Ir'd be stupid!
I don't plan that far ahead))) Naruto wasn't needed in this fic. But my guess is that he's either dead or they had a huge falling out with Sasuke, but now Sasuke wants to find him, that's why he told Suigetsu he needed assistance)))