Fic: No I Love You's (Sasuke-centric)

Feb 20, 2009 15:33

Title: “No I Love You’s”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: PG
Timeline: post-canon
Summary: Sasuke knows all kinds of loneliness, but he has never felt as lonely as he does now that the war is over and he has returned home. [Sasuke-centric; implied SasuNaru] Please R&R!
Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Kishimoto Masashi. Quotes from various manga chapters.
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anime, gen, naruto, p: sasuke/naruto, pre-slash, fanfiction

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industrialgirl1 February 20 2009, 12:42:46 UTC
Amazing story hon)) I love it a lot!))) Even though it did make me listen to Annie Lennox))) *stalks*

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istne_pieklo February 20 2009, 12:51:57 UTC
Yaaay! I love being stalked by you!))) Thank you))
What's wrong with Annie Lennox anyway? She has nice songs)))

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amai_amaya February 20 2009, 14:00:18 UTC
I liked this a lot - especially the ending and the stupid orange cup <3 The entire fic is just so Sasuke that I was even starting to get frustrated with him again XD

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istne_pieklo February 20 2009, 15:15:45 UTC
LOL, thanks! XDD The cup is the real protagonist of this fic))))))
I nearly made myself depressed while I was writing it. Glad you enjoyed it, darling! <3

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sowell February 20 2009, 14:28:26 UTC
Aw, I loved this. It had this sort of slow, melancholy feel to it, but there was still a lot of emotion packed in. I loved the end.

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istne_pieklo February 20 2009, 15:18:12 UTC
Thank you so much!
Sasuke deserved some hope, even though he actually behaved pretty stupid throughout the fic))) Thus, he gets a nearly-happy ending))))

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ylmik_wisty February 20 2009, 18:09:27 UTC
I LOVE ITTTT I LOVE THIS ONE SO MUCH ( ... )

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istne_pieklo February 20 2009, 18:20:30 UTC
YAAAY! Thank you so much! XDD *hugs*
LOL, the tea episode is based on my friends' preferences actually)) I drink tea with sugar, yet all of my friends (especially the best ones) drink tea without it))) And I remember one of them once saying that tea with sugar tasted horribly)) I remember Sasuke doesn't eat sweets, so maybe he also drinks sugar-free tea?))))
Kakashi has a history of saying wise things to Sasuke))) I love him for it)))
I used to nearly hate Karin before the battle with Killer Bee))) She's still my least fav member of Team Hawk, but she deserved smth nice, I think))) And Juugo is a sweetheart, so I wanted Tsunade to be able to help him)) Besides, he really needs to be close to Sasuke, what with his faith in Kimimaro and all)))
I'm glad you liked the ending. This story was getting so depressing; I wanted the ending to show that there was still hope for Sasuke))))
THAAAAAAAAAAANK YOU SO MUCH, DARLING! <3

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dune_master February 20 2009, 18:37:08 UTC
Wow, this is absolutely awesome! Though I can see why it depressed you. XDD I love the sense of abandonment it conveys, this irrevocable loneliness "in the crowd", which is so hard to fight. And the orange mug as the leitmotif is a great idea. It's so bright, so orange, vibrant, that you can practically envision it throughout the fic. The ending brings hope, and that's such a relief. Great job, love.

By the way, do you have Brautigan's books? *wants to rrrread* XPP

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istne_pieklo February 20 2009, 18:58:10 UTC
OMG! Thank you so much for such a brilliant review!!! XDDD
The cup seems to be everyone's favourite))) And undoubtedly the protagonist of the fic)))
Yeah, I have three of his novels, I think. The first one I read was about a PI dreaming of Babylon)) Kind of like a crack detective story with dark humour)))

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