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issen4

Stuff, and fic: Just a komi 1/?

May 12, 2009 12:59

Has RaceFail become a verb? As in, Lois McMaster Bujold has RaceFailed? (Also, *SIGH*. Tho' I still like the Vorkosigan series ( Read more... )

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penguin474 May 12 2009, 06:19:55 UTC

Oh, this is bittersweet; it made me feel a little choked up.
I'm looking forward to coming chapters.

Favourite line: Touya could recall hundreds of occasions when Go made everything better and when everything disintegrated without it. I really do believe this would be the case between them.

issen4 May 12 2009, 09:03:29 UTC

Thanks; glad you find it interesting.

Yeah, the two of them are connected by Go; I wanted to see what their relationship would like, in the face of that.

ramble_corner May 12 2009, 09:43:35 UTC

/sneaking comments in from work (your fic are a very bad influence :P)
The start of this really gave me a very bad feeling but then the last scene just gave me hope all over again *burbles

*dies
You will always manage to sneak in a line that made me squee
"Well, your Go books are so heavy!" Shindou had argued when confronted. "And besides, I was sort of hoping to catch you bending over to grab one of those 400-page bricks… wait, did I say that out loud?"

issen4 May 12 2009, 16:09:55 UTC

Uh, thanks? You could always save it to read later; I don't mind in the least. ^_^; I think I'm sermonising a lot in this chapter--have to watch that. But glad you didn't hate it despite the beginning.

And I'm glad you liked that line: it's fun to write Hikaru and Akira's dialogue.

kimby77 May 13 2009, 03:26:13 UTC

I think this a lot - it's very interesting, and it made me kind of sad. I'm hoping there will be more :)

issen4 May 13 2009, 04:30:30 UTC

Glad you thought it was interesting--thanks for reading! And commenting.

Yup, this is only the first chapter.

kimby77 May 13 2009, 04:33:01 UTC

Hah, oops, that first sentence was supposed to be "I like this a lot".

issen4 May 13 2009, 06:15:30 UTC

I got your meaning. ^^

nighteevee May 13 2009, 23:22:29 UTC

I have to say that the outset of this intrigues me - the ending which isn't an ending at all was particularly strong, I found, so in lieu of anything more intelligent to say: I'm looking forward to seing more :)

issen4 May 14 2009, 03:55:40 UTC

the ending which isn't an ending at all

You described it in a much better way than I did! ^__^

Thanks for reading and commenting, glad it intrigued you.