no-one but you chapter one

Mar 09, 2009 02:05

Comments: This is my first Ouran High School Host Club Fanfiction!! I had a previous idea for a one-shot song fic but then this one came to mind and I had to do it. This takes place two years after the anime ended, summer of 2009. Please don’t flame if at points they seem AU because, think about it, they have grown up a bit. And I am sorry if what ( Read more... )

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takuto_chan8 March 9 2009, 19:11:06 UTC
It's really good so far! Can't wait for more. Poor Tamaki and Hani!

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purplebloom500 March 9 2009, 22:21:14 UTC
Great start! I wish I could make my starting chapters that long.

Anyhoo, there were a few spelling mistakes such as: aloud instead of allowed. Word is a bitch when it comes to things like that.

I loved the last sentence. Can't wait to see more!

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sunshinebabe415 March 11 2009, 06:39:28 UTC
That was really good. I loved it and the last sentence was the perfect ending to this chapter. I can't wait to read more!
I also noticed a few spelling mistakes, nothing major though.

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