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Fic: Into the Dark (R) (4/4)

Apr 11, 2012 14:51

Into The Dark (4/4)
By isis_uf

Rating - R (possible NC-17 somewhere later in the series)
Word Count - 10k-ish
Warnings - Angst with a side of hope, canon-ish (whole series and Final Break), adult themes, references to violence and murder, mild cursing, rampant metaphor use, abuse of imagery themes, one or two probably incorrect internet translations of ( Read more... )

series, into the dark, prison break, fic

Comments 18

Hey ext_717286 April 15 2012, 01:31:51 UTC

OMG!!!!!! I love this fic!!!!! Great job :) Please continue this, I so want to know what happens :) 5*

Re: Hey isis_uf April 15 2012, 02:09:49 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm definitely writing more in this series. It'll be a while til the next part is posted but it will be called "Five Minutes to Midnight" and it will pick up exactly where this leaves off. I'm trying to work out the details of it right now, actually. I post on fanfiction.net (also as isis_uf). Feel free to friend me here or put me on author alerts there if you want to, so that you can immediately see when its posted. Thank you again so, so much for reviewing!

Re: Hey ext_717286 April 15 2012, 15:55:23 UTC

Hey Just me again :) Awww Im so glad your gonna carry on with this fic, I think its amazing and I love it :) I wont keep on bugging you, coz I know writing a brilliant fic takes time. Im just a huge MiSa shipper and I wish the show would have given them a happy ending, but reading your fic puts a smile on my face :) Thank you again *Top marks*

dani101 April 16 2012, 09:58:17 UTC

Gosh! That was incredible fic- can't wait for more.Please,update!:)))))))))

isis_uf April 16 2012, 18:26:08 UTC

Thank you so much! I got about 1k written last night and I hope to finish up the rest of chapter one of the sequel today. It'll be a while before its posted but it's definitely being actively obsessed over worked on.

:D ext_717286 April 16 2012, 22:24:50 UTC

OMG I so can't wait!!!! (Does happy dance) :P

tuesdaeschild April 21 2012, 12:17:58 UTC

Sorry about the edit!

I've been so cool so far but I can't help myself now...bloody hell!! ;)

repurposedNow isn't that a chilling word?!! And in the good cop-bad cop scheme of things I couldn't help thinking, in light of the fake red-head's words, that Dr. Irving is (was?!!) the good cop! The Company, even now the snake's head has been cut off, is a frighteningly evil entity ( ... )

isis_uf April 21 2012, 18:11:41 UTC

Heeeeee! Your reviews put the biggest stinking smile on my face. (appropriate icon is appropriate ( ... )

tuesdaeschild April 22 2012, 15:22:58 UTC

Pleased I could make you smile ( ... )

isis_uf April 25 2012, 20:44:56 UTC

I was flat-out giddy to see her comment. I really was. Thanks so much for spreading the word on my fic! I posted a few places but I really don't know the community well, obviously ( ... )

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msgenevieve April 22 2012, 10:32:38 UTC

Well.

I'm here via foxriverinmate, and all I can say is this is the S4 fix-it story I've been waiting to read for the last two years. I have just devoured all these chapters in one sitting, and I can't possibly do justice to any proper feedback with now, as I have to dash off. I'll be back later with a real comment, but for now, please accept a heartfelt ZOMG!!!11. LOL.

isis_uf April 25 2012, 20:27:41 UTC

So, I squealed like a little girl at your comment because it's lovely and I hugely enjoy and admire your fics. But, um, I maybe failed at replying to your comment. Sorry! In short? Thank you! I'm giddy that you enjoyed it! I'm working on the (much, much longer) sequel now.

ext_1174135 April 22 2012, 17:42:13 UTC

I have to say, i have read plenty of PB (especially MiSa) fics the last years after the end of the show and i have enjoyed some of them. However ive never read such an intriguing one. This fic and all its chapters (yet my favorite is the last one) are all amazingly done. I like the idea of yours continuing the story because it really gives me joy that after all it could still be an alternative ending. The way you wrote these , the details(like general's execution 4 years after-i liked that you didnt really change much untill these 4 years passed-the fact that michael never died and no one seemed to notice untill 4 years later, which is one reason it draw my attention at the first place-and finally jane's appearance that is still something from tha past comes to the future) and the reality you have created gives us the impression of wathcing/reading Prison Break. I hope you keep on writing this story you have started and keep on analyzing the characters in the way they were at the first created by the pb writers. Without spoiling too ( ... )

isis_uf April 25 2012, 20:37:46 UTC

Thank you! I've read oodles of PB fic too, though I've tried to avoid the post-Final Break ones for now because I really don't want them to affect my plans for this series inadvertently. I definitely wanted to do something that didn't conflict with canon but absolutely altered the ending. The General's execution will actually prove to be pretty important later on... and Jane will be a big player too.

the reality you have created gives us the impression of wathcing/reading Prison Break. I hope you keep on writing this story you have started and keep on analyzing the characters in the way they were at the first created by the pb writers. Without spoiling too much, i prefer your story than the one that was originally created.That's maybe one of the biggest compliments I've ever gotten. So, thank you so, so much! That means tons to me. There's a lot of things from seasons one and two that I want to kind of reintroduce here.... I don't want to give too much away but I think you'll pick up on it when I get there ( ... )