Fic: The Black King and the White Queen (14/14) (Ben/Sun)

[isis2015]

Title: The Black King and the White Queen
Rating: R
Summary: She had expected to feel anger, to have the pain of the loss of her husband split her heart in half as she stood in front of the man who had taken him from her. But she doesn't feel...anything. She feels utterly and completely empty as she looks at him.
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost. At

Comments

[weatheredlaw]

I was reading this and the beginning was a little slow and then BOOM. It picked up and I was like WHAT THE FUCK.

This is such an amazing story. You crafted the perfect relationship between Sun and Ben and the ending? Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Would I have liked to seen them get together? Of course. But that's not how it works. I was a little surprised at Ben's death, but you crafted it so well, I'm just really impressed.

Good job. Can't wait to see what else you write.

[isis2015]

Well, thank you very much. :) I'm so glad you liked it. Writing this was quite the journey and it's unlike anything I've done before, so that means a lot to me.

[squeakyboots]

What a great ending! I love Sun's wound/scar being her connection to Ben--it's so appropriate to the kind of relationship they had here. And the Widmore/Paik parallels were great as well. Bravo!

[isis2015]

Thank you. :) I'm so glad you liked this. It means a lot to me.

[superlung_lady]

Bravo, great ending. It was fitting; Ben's demise. My first thought was stalemate.

[isis2015]

Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it.