Fic: All the While it Was You - Part Two (Charlie/Claire)

[isis2015]

Title: All the While it Was You - Part Two
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This girl was...something else. He wasn’t sure he’d ever met anyone like her before.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: This is AU based on Falling in Love at a Coffee Shop by Landon Pigg. Claire is a barista at a coffee shop and Charlie is a

Comments

[meagan4dominic]

Okay, loved it. I have been waiting for this & you didn't let me down at all. There is so much of this that I love again.
First of all, I love the developing relationship between Charlie & Claire, having them be friends first & then slowly building is great.
I still absolutely love you for writing Hubby in, I miss Libby! You nailed Claire & I loved her encouraging Charlie. I loved how you added him having an emergency stash of drugs, AWESOME! & having Claire know Jack, awesome, can't wait for this to come out on the show. & the whole thing with Thomas, can't wait to see how that develops.
My favourite line was 'Libby agreed, enthusiastically. But then, what didn’t Libby do enthusiastically?'. Lmao, so true
I really can't wait for more, you've got me hooked

[isis2015]

I miss Libby so much sometimes, so writing her alive and happy with Hurley really is a treat. :) I'm so glad you're liking this so far. That's great! Thanks for reading.

[janie_tangerine]

Oh, that was just lovely. I like this premise so much, and woah, you do have an excellent Charlie voice indeed. I loved how you handled the whole business with Liam, it's just so IC. The way the relationship between Charlie and Claire is developing feels just right for them and I just generally love how you're handling this with all the canon bits like Thomas. And much love for Hurley and Libby *sigh*.

[isis2015]

Thanks! :D Charlie's POV is not one I've tackled very often before, so it's good to hear you think I'm getting it right. I'm so glad you're liking this, thanks for reading.

[isis2015]

Thank you! That's great to hear. I'm glad you're liking it. That's wonderful. :)

[hopelessfangirl]

Aw, another great installment! I can't wait to keep seeing where this is going. I love the chemistry you've created between Charlie/Claire of course, but this is probably my favourite line from this chapter:

" “I go where she goes,” he replied, gesturing to Libby and wrapping his arm around her."

Awwww, Hurlibby ♥

[isis2015]

Thanks hun! :D This one is really fun to write. I probably won't get around to it again until after New Years (I have Christmas fics still waiting), though. But, we'll see. And goodness knows I can't resist letting Hurley and Libby be happy. It still breaks my heart what they did to that pairing.

[autumn0000]

awww I love this fic so much ♥♥
I think this is my fave AU CC fic that I've read! :) all the characters are so well written, I can't wait for the next update :)

[isis2015]

I'm glad you liked it, thanks. :)