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Fic: Nothing Left to Break (Bela/OMC)

Nov 02, 2008 01:03

Title: Nothing Left to Break
Rating: PG-13
Summary: She had stolen from a lot of people. But he was the only one who had loved her.
Disclaimer: I do not own Supernatural. A girl can dream, but, alas, that's all it is.
Author's Note: Used for chem15try, prompt #03: Equilibrium.

( She had stolen from a lot of people. But he was the only one who had loved her. )

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Comments 5

hopelessfangirl November 3 2008, 01:41:07 UTC

I love this so much. It's exactly how I'd picture Bela reacting to love when it comes to her own self. Great job, dear!

isis2015 November 3 2008, 01:49:43 UTC

Thanks hun! :D I'm glad you liked it.

afteriwake November 9 2008, 03:05:55 UTC

I think you nailed Bela. I really liked this a lot.

isis2015 November 9 2008, 03:08:58 UTC

Well, thanks. :) I'm glad to hear that.

robbiex21 February 19 2011, 09:40:04 UTC

This was sad but also kind of moving. It's made all the more sad and moving by the fact that you've kept Bela in character. Doesn't matter that he loved her; she broke his heart and stole his money.

The last paragraph, referring to Abby, was the icing on the cake. Bravo and well done.