Comments | isis2015: Fic: Jaded (Juliet, Ben)

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Fic: Jaded (Juliet, Ben)

Mar 31, 2008 20:15

Title: Jaded
Rating: PG
Summary: The moment Juliet saw Goodwin’s body, run through by a sharp stick and lying there, alone, in the middle of the jungle, was the moment that the woman she had been before the island died.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: Used for un_love_you, prompt #10: I'm broken.

( The moment Juliet saw Goodwin’s body, run through by a sharp stick and lying there, alone, in the middle of the jungle, was the moment that the woman she had been before the island died. )

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Comments 9

wishingwillow April 1 2008, 04:41:15 UTC

This is absolutely heartbreaking. You have every right to be proud.

isis2015 April 1 2008, 04:49:27 UTC

Aw, well, thank you! That's lovely of you to say.

aurorawest April 1 2008, 09:02:22 UTC

Very nice. I love the last line particularly. I wish the show would depict that aspect of Juliet more...I feel so sure it must be how she would actually feel.

Great fic! :)

isis2015 April 1 2008, 09:03:17 UTC

Thanks! :) I'm so glad you liked it.

slybrunette April 1 2008, 20:44:01 UTC

Amazing. So true to her character.

Love it!

isis2015 April 1 2008, 22:52:55 UTC

Thanks! :)

demonqueen666 April 3 2008, 03:18:14 UTC

Very good, as always. You really get her and her voice.

isis2015 April 3 2008, 03:38:02 UTC

Aw, thanks hun! :) I'm so glad you think so.

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isis2015 April 7 2008, 19:14:47 UTC

Thanks. :) I'm glad you liked it.