Comments | isis2015: Fic: Two Steps Back (Juliet, Ben)

isis2015

Fic: Two Steps Back (Juliet, Ben)

Feb 13, 2008 21:28

Title: Two Steps Back
Rating: PG
Summary: Relief had flooded her when Ben had left with John, when he was no longer near her and she felt his toxic presence lifting, following him away.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: Used for un_love_you, prompt #16: I want to break you. Spoilers for 4.02 'Confirmed Dead'.

( Relief had flooded her when Ben had left with John, when he was no longer near her and she felt his toxic presence lifting, following him away. )

lost fic: juliet, lost fic, un_love_you, un_love_you: juliet, lost, fic

Comments 3

(The comment has been removed)

isis2015 February 14 2008, 09:22:20 UTC

There's really a lot to explore in Ben and Juliet's relationship. I'm actually interested in their early interaction, before she grew to hate his guts, so I'll probably be trying something with that later.

I'm glad you liked this, thank you. :)

_chica02 February 14 2008, 22:48:52 UTC

Oh, I LOVED this!

she felt his toxic presence lifting, following him away.
An absolutely brilliant description.

I also like the parallel between Miles and Juliet. Its obvious that Miles has anger issues (heh) and we've seen glimpses of that in Juliet too. Even though their ire is directed in the same place right now, its still so different.

And of course, Ben. One step ahead as always.

Great fic, thanks for sharing! :)

isis2015 February 14 2008, 23:01:33 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm so glad you liked this.