Fic: Contrast (Sawyer, Jack)

Dec 26, 2007 21:52

Title: Contrast
Rating: PG
Summary: All of Sawyer’s edges are sharp. Jack doesn’t even have to get close to see that.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: For gottalovev. I wanted to get this posted before I go on vacation so you know I didn't forget. ;)

All of Sawyer’s edges are sharp. Jack doesn’t even have to get close to see that. )

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eponine119 December 27 2007, 06:18:40 UTC
I love this! Sawyer's edges, and their contrariness, and Jack waiting and waiting. Such an excellent way to portray them both.

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isis2015 December 27 2007, 06:22:19 UTC
Aw, thank you hun! :) I'm glad to hear you liked it. This was an interesting one for me, writing-wise. I don't tackle Jack and Sawyer's platonic, canon-dictated relationship often. I wanted to play with Sawyer from Jack's POV and explore the kinds of ways he might see/look at him.

I'm glad that you enjoyed what I came up with. That means a lot to me.

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crickets December 27 2007, 06:32:09 UTC
This was perfect. I loved every word. Excellent.

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isis2015 December 27 2007, 06:38:00 UTC
Aw, thank you sweetie! :D That's lovely of you to say. ♥

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gottalovev December 27 2007, 16:25:14 UTC
oh wow, that is great! the gorgeous icon inspired you a really fascinating story! I love the idea of Jack observing Sawyer for days and more, trying to crack the puzzle... and that last line is perfect.

awesome job, thank you so much honey!!! (i have a drabble for you too but it's awfully angsty! need to write you a second one that is fluffier first! lol!)

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isis2015 December 27 2007, 16:57:16 UTC
Thank you, hun! :D I love the icon you picked, and originally I had this sort of steamy/sexy Jack/Sawyer idea, but when I sat down to write, this came out instead. I still may right that first one, though. ;)

(i have a drabble for you too but it's awfully angsty! need to write you a second one that is fluffier first! lol!)

Aw, thank you hun! ♥

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aboutbunnies December 27 2007, 16:32:41 UTC
Oh, this is just wonderful. Even though this is narrated by Jack, I find your characterization of Sawyer to be the most striking part. So well done.

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isis2015 December 27 2007, 16:57:36 UTC
Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it.

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isis2015 December 29 2007, 06:09:14 UTC
Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it.

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