Title: Aimless in Wander
Rating: PG
Summary: It’s better this way. Temporary is always safer.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: For
philosophy_20, prompt #9: orientation.
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It’s better this way. Temporary is always safer. )
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(and I spotted a tiny typo in the first paragraph - you put their instead of neither I think)
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Typo now fixed. Thanks for letting me know. :)
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Their ways will part, eventually, and Kate knows that she survived loosing a connection she had needed once. She also knows that she won’t be able to do it again.
I love that part, the entire ending rocks in fact. The way you've written them, kind of awkward and yet totally perfect for them.
Great fic!
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I really love this little snapshot, this moment. It feels very real - the familiarity, the awkwardness. I just love the way they kind of regard each other, the way they say so little and yet they're communicating so much. It's sweet and subtle and really effective. Lovely job :)
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