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larxene_12 July 5 2012, 22:24:28 UTC
I see you've added on another chapter :D Hurray!!

Oh John, you are so stubborn xD Even if he hadn't drunk so much, he would have forced himself to remember you, Rose.

I feel so sorry for him, though. Rose is back, but that means the Doctor will be too, and then she'll be gone for good. At least this time he'll have closure, though.

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akumakoronso July 6 2012, 00:17:34 UTC
Ah HAHAHAH! I love it. Getting closer to alien activity!
I always look forward to your updates, and this is no different.
I'm glad John didn't give up, and I was hesitant to call Mari, Rose cuz I wasn't sure, but I'm glad my assumption was right. I'd confuse myself trying to picture either Mari from the movie or Rose.

Too bad John didn't have contacts who could be more discrete. Unless THEY are better.... much better I'm guessing.

Looking forward to more!

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pinigir July 6 2012, 22:14:17 UTC
Love it so far. Would love to read more! :-)

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fogsblue July 8 2012, 07:51:14 UTC
Ohhhh, this is great, I love the mystery and suspense and poor John. And yay, Sarah Jane! :)

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ahedonia July 10 2012, 09:43:48 UTC
OMG, I just started reading this and I LOVE. IT. Exceptionally good writing and sharply, vividly in character. Please write quickly!

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isilienelenihin July 10 2012, 16:49:00 UTC
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm working on Chapter 3 right now, hopefully it'll be posted later today! :D

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