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isilienelenihin

TLAWR Chapter Fifty-Two: The World is Wrong

Mar 17, 2012 16:44

An AU retelling of season 4, beginning with The Last of the Time Lords from season 3. First story in the All Roads Lead Home series. Rated teen.

10/Rose, Martha, Jack Harkness, Donna Noble, the Master, River Song, Sarah Jane Smith, and many more.

(Earlier Entries) ( Chapter Forty-Nine ) ( Chapter Fifty ) ( Chapter Fifty-One )

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jack harkness, donna noble, turn left, brigadier lethbridge-stewart, alternate universe, doctor who, fanfiction, river song, all roads lead home, season 4, mickey smith, doctor 10, rose

Comments 8

miss_tina_lynn March 18 2012, 01:08:54 UTC

Wow! 4 new chapters! Very exciting. Also love how you're handling Turn Left, it was a great ep.

isilienelenihin March 18 2012, 15:54:30 UTC

Thank you! :D It's a lot of fun to write.

tracy_lousia March 18 2012, 02:43:32 UTC

Very interesting, I like River in this, and the Jack references. This bit "If the Doctor never met Donna, than I would never have been born" leads me to believe that maybe River is a sort of metacrisis????
Also I remembered the bit you said about future Donna/Lee at Torchwood :-) Looking forward to seeing how it all comes together. Loving it lots :-D

isilienelenihin March 18 2012, 15:57:10 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying it! We're getting to the fun parts now--the episodes that are undergoing significant change due to Rose's presence. :D

I think that River Song was a brilliant concept that was executed poorly. Her story is full of plot holes and really makes very little sense when you look at it from a logical standpoint. I'm trying to remedy that, and shift her to fit in a Doctor/Rose centered universe. :D

Donna deserves to be happy, and Shaun was nice, but Lee is perfect. :D Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

onabearskinrug March 18 2012, 13:09:49 UTC

You are so mysterious and I am BEYOND hooked :-) can't wait for more!!!

isilienelenihin March 18 2012, 15:57:45 UTC

Thank you! I will now make the finger steeple of evil contemplation.

More is forthcoming! :D

othermewriter March 18 2012, 23:24:31 UTC

Very interesting! I so can't wait to see where your going and how you get there with the changes! One of these days the Doctor is going to learn to take vacations in the safety of his own home sweet TARDIS!

isilienelenihin March 19 2012, 05:29:36 UTC

I think there needs to be some 'float in the vortex' time. Perhaps the TARDIS will simply refuse to move. :D

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm working on the next bit right now, and hopefully it'll be posted in the next few hours. :D