A Beautiful Disaster: Chapter Seven

[isilienelenihin]

An AU look at Human Nature/Family of Blood with a season 1 twist. Inspired by "Catalyst," by Anna Nalick.

It features Rose/9, Jack Harkness

( Chapter One ) ( Chapter Two ) ( Chapter Three ) ( Chapter Four ) ( Chapter Five )


A/N: Nothing you recognize belongs to me!  Don't forget to vote for the story that you want to replace 'A

Comments

[isilienelenihin]

Yes! One of the things I love about the Ninth and Tenth Doctors is how they say her name. They manage to fit so much emotion in two words. :D I'm glad you enjoyed John's release. He may be a human, but he's a hell of a lot braver than the Doctor, in some ways.

Duhn duhn duhn, the Family arrives!

[larxene_12]

I wanted to smack them both upside the head and lock them in a closet at the beginning of this chapter. Now I want to find a bottle of ginger ale (not champagne, cause I'm underage, and that's ILLEGAL) and throw an impromptu party at the end. I'm also visualizing something resembling the PotW kiss.

He managed to fit so much meaning into two words.

One thing I love about the Doctor- words are his weapon. I just love all the intensity and joy and disdain and heartbreak that the different incarnations can put into a few words. And the speeches? Nothing short of magnificent.

He could sense tension in her, but not the cause.

Want to find out? Just look in the nearest mirror. Oh, he is SO clueless...

[isilienelenihin]

More on this kiss in chapter 8! :D I know, I know, it's becoming something of a habit for me to cut when it gets good, but if I left the scene I'm planning in this chapter would be very long. I was also jumping up and down when I finished writing, because THESE CHARACTERS ARE STUBBORN. Half the time I feel like they're doing the writing and I'm just transcribing.

[bloose09]

If there was an Olympic Gold medal for backpedaling, the Doctor would win it! Argh! The UST is killing me! Jack is such a good friend to the two of them and especially to Rose.

This is absolutely the Doctor. You have captured him perfectly in this moment.
"Rose Tyler," he said quietly and something inside her clenched. He sounded just like the Doctor-had the same inflection, the exact same way of rolling her name in his mouth. He managed to fit so much meaning into two words. It shouldn't be possible but it was. She held her breath in anticipation of what would follow. "Any chance I could get some tea? Fancy a cuppa."

So Misters Baines and Hutchinson the losers who messed with Rose in the Bad Wolf. Oh well, guess you just made First Contact Baines. Time to get behind the sofa and hold onto something because it is going to be a bumpy ride!

Thanks for another great chapter!

[isilienelenihin]

"If there was an Olympic Gold medal for backpedaling, the Doctor would win it!" <----Quoted for Truth. Good to know that I've gotten the sexual tension up. It's easy to do, with those two. They're practically dripping with it!

First Contact Baines indeed! I like that phrase. :D Yup, I wanted to tie him and Hutchinson in. Jenny was also mentioned briefly, but Mr. Cartwright and Lucy haven't appeared yet. Don't worry, they will. :D

[wikidwitch]

Gosh, I'm a sucker for Family of Blood / Human Nature Nine/Rose goodness. And this is absolutely AWESOME! Brilliantly written, emotionally wrenching - everything. Flawless. LOVE IT TO PIECES!

*fangirls*

[isilienelenihin]

Thank you so much! :D

If you haven't checked out "In Human Hands" (it's linked on my page of Fics To Read!) I highly suggest it. Rallalon writes brilliantly, and although I'm not sure if she's going to finish it, what's posted is absolutely gorgeous.

[tracy_lousia]

Beautiful and well written as always. Looking forward to seeing where it goes and more kissing please :-)

[isilienelenihin]

Now that they've started, it's going to be difficult to get them to stop kissing! XP