Comments | ishonn: FIC: All Wrong

ishonn

FIC: All Wrong

Apr 11, 2007 17:30

Title: All Wrong
Characters: Sirius/Remus
Era: First War
Rating: G
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: I disclaim.
A/N: Another writer’s flood? Not really written for a nest_of_spiders prompt, but inspired by the community’s idea. All feedback - praise and criticism, open and anonymous, public and private - will be treasured.
EDIT (April 13th): Some small but meaningful ( Read more... )

remus/sirius, remus, drabble, fic, sirius

Comments 13

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ishonn April 11 2007, 17:39:29 UTC

I'm grateful for your praise, yet I must admit I'm very worried now that it's not understandable what the situation is about. I suppose the note about the era isn't enough, then.

Well, it's happening during the First War, when the Order members suspect Remus of being the spy - I expect this should answer all your questions.

In any case thank you for letting me know about your impressions!

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ishonn April 11 2007, 19:00:37 UTC

Haha, another coffee addict! :gives thumbs up:

Shall I feel relieved that it does make sense then?

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ishonn April 11 2007, 19:18:25 UTC

I'm glad to hear that!

h_maldeire April 12 2007, 01:41:27 UTC

Strong bond between the two main characters, and it was well-established within 100-words. : )

ishonn April 12 2007, 03:50:30 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad the bond was so distinct.

opheliet April 12 2007, 03:51:20 UTC

Wonderful drabble, yet again. I hope you don't mind, I added you as a friend (drifted over via nest_of_spiders).

Anyway, this drabble- I love this line: We should stay in bed today, drink hot chocolate and play chess, and make love. It's like when you know everything's just wrong, so all you want to do is hide for the day. Which pretty much sums up what's going on. I thought this was lovely, with a great foreboding sense.

ishonn April 12 2007, 04:08:05 UTC

Oh, of course I don’t mind! I hope it’s okay that I friend you back.

I’m very happy to hear you liked this line so much, and you must be right it sums up the whole situation in a way. Although I suppose they should stay in bed for longer than this one day, stay in bed and wait until it’s all over.

“Foreboding” is very much what I was aiming at, so it’s great that this notion is so distinct.

Many thanks for the wonderful comment!

pforte April 12 2007, 09:44:56 UTC

Oh, the sadness and despair were almost palpable. Well done!

ishonn April 12 2007, 10:28:39 UTC

Thank you very much! I’m glad these emotions were so distinct.