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Fic: Life Lessons - Chapter 7: In Which Ichigo Finally Figures It Out

Sep 15, 2009 02:18

Title: Life Lessons -- Chapter 7: In Which Ichigo Finally Figures It Out
Author: nehalenia
Pairing: Ichigo/Ishida (soon)
Rating: PG in this chapter; NC-17 overall.
Warnings: Mild nudity, language and uhm... doughnuts?
COMMUNITY DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in sexual situations in this post/fanfiction/fanart (including material in the ( Read more... )

genre: romance, rating: pg, fanfiction, author: nehalenia

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nehalenia September 15 2009, 16:34:01 UTC

You're not the only one! ;)

madrona_8 September 15 2009, 15:30:01 UTC

Binge eating much Ichigo?
I love your Chad, he's such the voice of reason. He's to the point with out being rude.
Now Ichigo, go talk to him. Say what you gotta say.

nehalenia September 15 2009, 16:33:29 UTC

Haha, you have no idea how much I wanted doughnuts during and after writing this. :D Chad is such a great character to have around. In canon, you can see him watching people and how they relate to each and making internal comments -- like when Ichigo & Ishida are arguing in the Garganta going to HM -- so you know he sees and understands a lot more than he talks about. He makes such a good foil for Ichigo and Ishida, too. Maud knows someone there needs to be calm. ;)

kuro_wolf September 15 2009, 18:21:51 UTC

I missed this! :D i am so glad you updated! and yea~ for Ichi! FOr finally opening his eyes and heart and for not being such a dunderhead!
After all that has happened and the drama, this chapter made me smile, :)
And i hope he talks to Ishida!

nehalenia September 15 2009, 19:16:41 UTC

Yes, Ichigo not being quite so much of a dunderhead is going to be a relief. Sorry this update took so long. I'm hoping the next will be much more timely. Oh, and thanks so much for your comment! I'm gld you liked it.

bloodandpepper September 15 2009, 18:27:25 UTC

Adorable. Reading your stories is always a pleasure, but this one is simply delicious. The way you're writing Ichigo is loveable and authentic and I do adore his dynamic with Chad. They are a 'duo infernale', this is proof enough. Can't wait for more! Yay for more Ishida!
And I want doughnuts, too. Damn. Only got a dry coissant from yesterday's breakfast...

nehalenia September 15 2009, 19:15:39 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm always relieved to know that the characters are coming across the way they should.

And yes, writing this made me want doughnuts too, darn it.

komishun September 16 2009, 00:52:47 UTC

Wow, that "Uryuu" drop-in was so seamless I had to go back to make sure Ichigo had said it. Yay, Go Chad! Now let's see how long it takes for Ichigo to breakdown and confess to Ishida already.

"I've seen you naked twice. The first time you were having sex with Buff-the-Impaler and now I'm in love with you. You will date with me?" XD

"Chad did(n't) saying anything for a moment. He crumpled the top of the doughnut bag and folded it down." -About 3/4 the way through, in the car. :)

nehalenia September 16 2009, 01:39:36 UTC

Oh thanks! Both for the commentary and the SPAG catch. I appreciate it! *fixing now*