FIC: Intimate Skirmishes, NC17 -- Part 1

[nehalenia]

Title: Intimate Skirmishes -- 1/2
Author: nehalenia
For: Ouri, with many thanks for her generous donation to livelongnmarry
Pairing: Ichigo/Ishida
Rating: NC17
Warnings/Kinks: reiatsu play/kink, masturbation, boysmex, spoilers for the Soul Society arc. Also, maybe a bit AU, since I don't think Ichigo ever got that good at controlling his reiatus. ;-)

Comments

[saluli]

This was really very good to read! You managed to catch the quincy's spirit like a few people managed. And the idea of Ishida being so affected by Ichigo's reiatsu is something that makes a lot of sense.

See you in part 2!

[nehalenia]

Thank you! The reiatsu kink was Ouri's request, and it really was interesting to write. It definitely does make sense.

[rabid_fangrrl]

Weeeeeee! You're not dead! Huzzah!
As per usual, this is delicous! I like the sensitivity you capture in Uryuu. The sensual tension you describe with the reiatsu, the way you prescribe an almost animalistic quality to Kurosaki's reiastu is lovely.
And the angst! Oh the gut-wretching pain of a kis rebuked! Agonizing!

This line:
Ishida lay there, the sun warm on his face, bits of gravel digging into his elbows
really stuck out to me - I think the inclusion of the physical sentiment coupled with the emotional turmoil - gravel digging into the skin was a dunno, a novel descriptor for the situation that I found appealing.

On to part II!

[nehalenia]

Thanks sweetie! You always pick up on the little stuff like that, and it just tickles me. The bits of angst were fun. It makes me want to write some really angsty Bleach fic (but which turns out okay, of course; and has lots and lots of smex.) ;-)

[eternalsayonara]

This is absolutely lovely! Part 2, here I come!

[whitedestiny1x2]

Wow, this is so intense! The way you describe Ichigo's reiatsu through Ishida's POV is amazing--I feel like I'm the one who has trouble breathing!! The tension between them just crackles. Anyway, awesome work! I'm off to part two! :D