[FIC] One More Try: Chapter 12

Dec 04, 2013 08:56

Title: One More Try
Author: isha_mabin
Pairing: AKAME, JinxOC
Rating: PG-15 - NC-17
Genre: Romance, AU, Angst
Disclaimer: I only own half of the plot and the original character Stephanie Jones, nothing (and no one) else
Summary: Everything was going well for Kazuya Akanishi. He had an awesome and drop-dead hot (not to mention rich) husband that loves him ( Read more... )

genre: angst, genre: au, p: akame, p: jinxoc, l: multi-chap, fic: one more try, genre: romance

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dilovesyunjae December 4 2013, 04:04:44 UTC
i read everything again and lets just say a lot of tears were shed. Just imagining being in kame's shoes was so so so painful. Trust is so hard to give but can be so easily broken. And the trauma that Kame is still carrying now, those scars will never fade.

I really hope you make it very very VERY hard for Jin to get Kame back. 2 years of being alone is enough compared to what happened to kame. Oh yes im being vindictive again. LOL.

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isha_mabin December 11 2013, 13:44:37 UTC
I already expected a lot of readers to be vindictive hahahaha. Let's just say Jin won't be off the hook so easily.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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isha_mabin December 11 2013, 13:51:07 UTC
Hi!!! Are you a new reader? I'm so sorry, I'm so bad at memorizing people *gets bricked*

Jennifer?

Surprisingly, I know a lot of real life couples who went through things as drastic as what akame went through in this story and still stayed together at the end. I couldn't understand it too but I guess marriage is really something that I won't ever understand until I'm there :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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masami93 December 4 2013, 06:32:25 UTC
Oooow! That's sad :( Jin deserves it all but I still feel pity for him
... sooo, he has a baby daughter, he? she must be cute (even though she's Stephanie's child too)

So taht's what happend to Kazuya! My poor, little thing! Is there an end to his suffering?
And is Jin going to fid out about it??

But to be honest, even after all this, I still hope they will be together in the end :D they are perfect for each other!

Lovely chapter! I can't wait for more! Update soon, please!

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isha_mabin December 11 2013, 13:54:55 UTC
Miyuki is definitely so cute!!! She takes after her father (because I'm the writer and I want her to look like Jin)

I'm not supposed to reveal whether JIn will find out or not, gomen! You'd just have to read the coming chapters to find out :)

Despite some of my readers not agreeing, I still want them to end up together too.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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akame_koi13 December 4 2013, 07:58:48 UTC
Looking forward to it. Update this sooooon~ I'm deprived here. I need to know what happens next.
I liked this chapter though. And poor Kame! Jin you idiot! You weren't there when he needed you the most! I wonder how he'll react if (when?) he learns the truth…

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isha_mabin December 11 2013, 13:56:10 UTC
I'll try to update as soon as possible. I just need to squeeze it in between my studies and my part-time jobs so I'm so sorry if it might be updated a little later than usual. Gomen!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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mbee0805 December 4 2013, 08:30:19 UTC
huwaaa update~~~ yatta~
i've been waiting for this isha-chan ^^
jin poor you, despite what happen to kazuya i didn't found the need to pitying him because he has someone to cheer him up but jin, jin was alone he just want to save his son eventhou he's the one who made a mistake in the first place
and i don't like how pi just going to LA without informing jin at least jin is kazuyas' husband and for tatsuya its better if you just go and beat the hell out of jin
now jin is suffering but Gambate jin~
i'm into the story and im sorry for my blabering hehe
arigatchuuuu~ isha-chan ^^

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isha_mabin December 11 2013, 13:59:51 UTC
Hi mbe-chan!!!!

Pi didn't inform Jin because Kazuya didn't want Jin to know and well at that point, Pi was trying not to upset Kazuya more so he agreed to whatever Kazuya wanted. Like Pi said, beating Jin up would solve nothing. It wouldn't change the fact that Kazuya was raped.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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